Love Vs. Reality

[fahadhnazir]

Past time has started fading,
while, main life story is initiating.
I realized, it’s no use of blaming
the ones who put my life on endless flaming.

All think that with the rocks they’ve thrown,
I would mutter them the entire frown.
I won’t because I’m enough grown
with a number of hurts which I’ve unshown.

I realized that I should have thought more broad,
when my life started changing to an unlike goad.
Then the one I loved made me feel I’m ignored,
but she didn’t realize the truth that she was too much adored.

It was a war between love and love,
And no one to pass on the peace dove.
Then was the time the phrases wove
Which led everything to a final disprove.

To be continued…


~Fahadh~ [email protected]

 

[methsri]

nice bro ..... patta eli wata

is it based on a true story ??

 

[Wolverine GTR]

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[wajiras]

ela ela

 

[djanuradhaxxx]

ela ela ...........

 

[fahadhnazir]

nice bro ..... patta eli wata

is it based on a true story ??

ow machang..it's based on a true story thamai.... a wage ekak nisa thama bokkenma wachana galaagena enne ..

 

[sirajstc]

max

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

It seems to be missed calculating the meaning of loving one... isn’t? bor... it is happening bro due to bad manners. We are more careless at our teen age...but what to do.. we don’t have any experience to understand something/someone at that time.. Unfortunately when we understand it we are too late..

 

[Zeus]

Despite the core of the poem
Its a nice creation man
Keep them coming
Rhymes are great and can be use as Rap too

 

[Doly]

realized that I should have thought more broad,
when my life started changing to an unlike goad.
Then the one I loved made me feel I’m ignored,
but she didn’t realize the truth that she was too much adored.



hmmmmmmm

Something to think

 

[DJ ASHAN]

he he....ela.....

 

[whooff]

Past time has started fading,
while, main life story is initiating.
I realized, it’s no use of blaming
the ones who put my life on endless flaming.

All think that with the rocks they’ve thrown,
I would mutter them the entire frown.
I won’t because I’m enough grown
with a number of hurts which I’ve unshown.

I realized that I should have thought more broad,
when my life started changing to an unlike goad.
Then the one I loved made me feel I’m ignored,
but she didn’t realize the truth that she was too much adored.

It was a war between love and love,
And no one to pass on the peace dove.
Then was the time the phrases wove
Which led everything to a final disprove.

To be continued…


~Fahadh~ [email protected]

great..................

 

[fahadhnazir]

Yeah.. to be continued means that I am now working on with the other part as well.. that verses would be released soon..

 

[twisted]

can't say very well written but good creation dude keep it up and keep them coming you'll improve

 

[methsri]

ow machang..it's based on a true story thamai.... a wage ekak nisa thama bokkenma wachana galaagena enne ..

hmm hmmm machan kohomaunath .....hope everything ok now

 

[fahadhnazir]

hmm hmmm machan kohomaunath .....hope everything ok now

Na bung.. things are settled.. settled means.. things are OVER.. .. that's what god has bestowed..

2nd part of this poems coming soon..

 

[fahadhnazir]

I just want any commentz in order for me to go ahead further writing... but thnx for the support given