lustful tree

sihini

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Nash' said:
meka ara OL english lit walata thiyena POISON TREE poem eka wage....
but eke kiyanna yaalukama gana...meke thiyenne aadarya gana....

u have written this in a professional way sihini...i dunno y...but wen u read it...it gives u a feeln of reedin a pro poet's poem...
awesum rytn...keep it up...
n wishes 4 u to get a guy f ya dreams!

lol.thanks for your commets but no guys in ma dream:no::no::no:
 

ravicplk

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sorry for the late comment..love can end up giving two results..
can be a happy ending or a hatred...
this one deals with the hatred as i think...
anyway good poem sihini...
keep writing.
 

sihini

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ravicplk said:
sorry for the late comment..love can end up giving two results..
can be a happy ending or a hatred...
this one deals with the hatred as i think...
anyway good poem sihini...
keep writing.

lol,yeh sure:):):):):)
thanks for da comment:)
 

Zeus

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    As u said the roots of the tree remains intact
    Means the tree will rise aging
    Al u have to do is wait
    This topic out of ma scope but
    Nice poem sis :D