MAGE DUWE.........

harshafx · Nov 26, 2008

@tntpunk
man meka mechchara wela nokiya hitiye..eth ithin kiyamu..mona karannada... thamange amma/nangi/akka/birinda thawath pirimiyek gen hinsanayata lak wenakota oyata balan inna puluwannam..... (histhana pura wanna oyagema adahas walin

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archirasika · Nov 26, 2008

maleemsg said:
mewage siddi kiiyak ape rate me aurudda ethulatha ahanna lebunada? man hithanne matama mathaka siddia 4 kata wada wedeii .... kothanahari loku weraddak wela thiyanawa.... .Arachchi aiya lassanata kaviya pela gaswala liyala thiyanawa... eth hebehin me wage athdekeemakata muna dena thaththek ge duka kiya ganna wachana api athara nethuwa ethi!

eka tatta kenek kiyala tibba...eya principal kenek...etanin tamai mata adahaa awe..

thanks malmeeya.....

GTRZ · Nov 26, 2008

Good work bro, nice visualization of the story in poetry.

maleemsg · Nov 26, 2008

archirasika said:
eka tatta kenek kiyala tibba...eya principal kenek...etanin tamai mata adahaa awe..

thanks malmeeya.....

mal moka?

ow ow
mamath dawasak radio Prog. ekaka oya wage kathawak gena ahuwa ara train eke yana ena girl kenek ge maranayak gena me aurudde mula wage sidda una....

paw dewiyane e thaththa hodatama eduwa! :sorry:

archirasika · Nov 26, 2008

GTRZ said:
Good work bro, nice visualization of the story in poetry.

thanks lokka....this is your first comment on my poems...its really encouraging....

samanali1987 · Nov 26, 2008

im sorry i couldnt get back to this ! tntpunk if this is bullshit y dunt u show us whats not ! im like dying to c one of ur creations !

archirasika · Nov 26, 2008

maleemsg said:
mal moka?

ow ow
mamath dawasak radio Prog. ekaka oya wage kathawak gena ahuwa ara train eke yana ena girl kenek ge maranayak gena me aurudde mula wage sidda una....

paw dewiyane e thaththa hodatama eduwa!

aluth mee visheshayak...malmeeyo...

ow ane...mata mage podi nangi duwek wage...eya sambandha karala mehema deyak hituwath mage anga hiri watenawa

tntpunk · Nov 26, 2008

harshafx said:
@tntpunk
man meka mechchara wela nokiya hitiye..eth ithin kiyamu..mona karannada... thamange amma/nangi/akka/birinda thawath pirimiyek gen hinsanayata lak wenakota oyata balan inna puluwannam..... (histhana pura wanna oyagema adahas walin )

Mata pudgalikawa balan inna puluwanda barida kiyana eka api katha karana deta adala nahane.Ow mata aka balan inna bari wei.Mama kiwwe nahane mama tharka karana deta mama ekangai kiyala.

Api tharka karana deta pudgalika ekanga wena eka awashyama naha. :rolleyes:

tntpunk · Nov 26, 2008

samanali1987 said:
im sorry i couldnt get back to this ! tntpunk if this is bullshit y dunt u show us whats not ! im like dying to c one of ur creations !

I sayed its bullshit.I didnt say i could do better than that.

Asoka Hemantha · Nov 26, 2008

Lassana Kaviyak bro, ewagema hoda hakiyawak obata thiyenwa , tawa liyanna!!!! obay haikiyawa agayami!

archirasika · Nov 26, 2008

tntpunk said:
Mata pudgalikawa balan inna puluwanda barida kiyana eka api katha karana deta adala nahane.Ow mata aka balan inna bari wei.Mama kiwwe nahane mama tharka karana deta mama ekangai kiyala.

Api tharka karana deta pudgalika ekanga wena eka awashyama naha.

Mwtana bohoma simple deyak tiyenne….tamanta pudgalikawa vindinna bari de anith ayatath vindinna baha..ekenma oyage tarka okkoma binda watenawa…

Paw walin walakena lesima kramaya ekane…tamanta adalawa siteema….bohoma sarala darma karanayak….

harshafx · Nov 26, 2008

tntpunk said:
Mata pudgalikawa balan inna puluwanda barida kiyana eka api katha karana deta adala nahane.Ow mata aka balan inna bari wei.Mama kiwwe nahane mama tharka karana deta mama ekangai kiyala.

Api tharka karana deta pudgalika ekanga wena eka awashyama naha.

heheh anna ekane...manasin usasa minisata molayak saha parikalpana hakiyaawak deela thiyenne...sobadahama manussayata kisi deyak kiyaa dila naha...hithanna molayak dila thiyenawa..eh molaya swabaadahame..eh mole pawichchi karala hada gaththu sadacharathmaka sirith wirith swabadahamath ekka hari apuruwata galapunu hinda thamai me tharam durak Homo sapien sapiens kiyana sathwayaa awith thiyenne...thawa tharka karoth oyawa hadaa ganna puluwan kiyala mata wishwaasai...

tntpunk · Nov 26, 2008

archirasika said:
Mwtana bohoma simple deyak tiyenne….tamanta pudgalikawa vindinna bari de anith ayatath vindinna baha..ekenma oyage tarka okkoma binda watenawa…

Paw walin walakena lesima kramaya ekane…tamanta adalawa siteema….bohoma sarala darma karanayak….

Mama ekanga naha .Meka oya kiyana deyakne.Minissunge sithum pathum vividai.Mama piligatta kiyala ho mama aka vinda kiyala anith ayath eka vindeevi kilyala kiyana eka waradi.

maleemsg · Nov 26, 2008

Tntpunk - ai oya meka akamethi?

archirasika · Nov 26, 2008

tntpunk said:
Mama ekanga naha .Meka oya kiyana deyakne.Minissunge sithum pathum vividai.Mama piligatta kiyala ho mama aka vinda kiyala anith ayath eka vindeevi kilyala kiyana eka waradi.

oya bauddha mama hitanne? mama kiyanne budun wadala dharamaa....pas pain walakeema kiyana de tiyenne budu dahame witharak newi..anith agam walath vividha widiyata tiyenawa...

pas pavin walakeeme pahasua de tama tama anuwa siteema...tamata menma anith ayatath ridena bawa terum ganeema...e sathyaya waradi nam oya ekko modai, nathnam buduntath wada wadi kenek wenna oni...

tntpunk · Nov 26, 2008

harshafx said:
heheh anna ekane...manasin usasa minisata molayak saha parikalpana hakiyaawak deela thiyenne...sobadahama manussayata kisi deyak kiyaa dila naha...hithanna molayak dila thiyenawa..eh molaya swabaadahame..eh mole pawichchi karala hada gaththu sadacharathmaka sirith wirith swabadahamath ekka hari apuruwata galapunu hinda thamai me tharam durak Homo sapien sapiens kiyana sathwayaa awith thiyenne...thawa tharka karoth oyawa hadaa ganna puluwan kiyala mata wishwaasai...

swabawa dahamen hama sathwayatama molayak deela thiyenawa.Lokaye thiyena eka piliganeemak thamai minisa me vidihata diyunu veema ahambayak kiyana eka.Minisa parinamanaya une wandurangen kiyana eka amathaka karanna epa.
Aka hariyata gangak hadenawa wage.
Mulin podi wathura parak galagena yanakota ahamben thawa wathura parak ekathu wenawa.Passe mudata watena kota aka loku gangak.wathura parata attatama wenna thibune washpa wela yana eka.Ahambayaking thawa wathura parak munagahila gangak una.

tntpunk · Nov 26, 2008

maleemsg said:
Tntpunk - ai oya meka akamethi?

Aka harima gon topic ekak ane.ekai. :lol:

amilabanuka · Nov 26, 2008

tntpunk said:
swabawa dahamen hama sathwayatama molayak deela thiyenawa.Lokaye thiyena eka piliganeemak thamai minisa me vidihata diyunu veema ahambayak kiyana eka.Minisa parinamanaya une wandurangen kiyana eka amathaka karanna epa.
Aka hariyata gangak hadenawa wage.
Mulin podi wathura parak galagena yanakota ahamben thawa wathura parak ekathu wenawa.Passe mudata watena kota aka loku gangak.wathura parata attatama wenna thibune washpa wela yana eka.Ahambayaking thawa wathura parak munagahila gangak una.

ahamben hari kohoma hari machan api parinamaya wuna. ipaduna gaman wadurek danan dewal thiyena. api ipaduna gaman melo magulak danne na. ekiyanne api waduroi athara godak loku wenasak thiyenawa molen. mole thibunata hama sathektama hithanna ba. apita hithanna puluwan. ekai ape wenasa.

maleemsg · Nov 26, 2008

tntpunk said:
Aka harima gon topic ekak ane.ekai.

me yana lokuu wade asse mama podi prashna ahanawata sama wenna....

tharaha nethuwa mata kiyanawada ai ekata "gon topic" ekak kiyanne kiyala

tntpunk · Nov 26, 2008

amilabanuka said:
ahamben hari kohoma hari machan api parinamaya wuna. ipaduna gaman wadurek danan dewal thiyena. api ipaduna gaman melo magulak danne na. ekiyanne api waduroi athara godak loku wenasak thiyenawa molen. mole thibunata hama sathektama hithanna ba. apita hithanna puluwan. ekai ape wenasa.

Oya api kiyala kiyanne dan inna parinamaya wechcha wandurantane.Parinamaya wechcha api parinamaya novichcha vanduroi compare karana eka waradi ne.

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