Mage mahalu hitha...

[aravindalj]

 

[DJ ASHAN]

nize one broo

 

[G2H]

Awww Mekanum harima lassanyi...

 

[Doly]

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm!

to be honest this is really GREAT
Just great

 

[aravindalj]

Awww Mekanum harima lassanyi...

thank u

 

[Nisha.hasanthi]

athatama meka lassana kawiyak..

 

[aravindalj]

nize one broo

thankx dude

 

[wick321]

Oooph... Jeevithaya...H..m.m.m. Ehemath Wenawa Thamai...

 

[DJANURADHA@mp3]

mmm bilama kiyawanna one..


ela ela machan patta///

 

[archirasika]

machan.....oka ape tiyena waraddak....okata issellama waga kiyanna oni karunasena jayalath...ape kollanta kasada nobanda, premaya wenuwen anda anda inna kiyala igannuwe e peretaya tamai golu hadawata liyala...anyway i dont think this is your personal idea...but i dont like the idea of the poem at all...but as a poem, its very good...

poetically = good
ideologically = very bad

 

[DJANURADHA@mp3]

machan.....oka ape tiyena waraddak....okata issellama waga kiyanna oni karunasena jayalath...ape kollanta kasada nobanda, premaya wenuwen anda anda inna kiyala igannuwe e peretaya tamai golu hadawata liyala...anyway i dont think this is your personal idea...but i dont like the idea of the poem at all...but as a poem, its very good...

poetically = good
ideologically = very bad

ai hutch sim ekeki dunna eka tama anik waradda neda aiyeee


man hitan ne ada kale love karana aya owa kiyawanawa & balanawa kiyala aiyaa...


adaraya kiyanne kochra amuthu deyakida,,

sathutakima neme antimata kadulu vitary....

 

[LAPD]

its so nice bro

 

[Robin_Hood]

machan.....oka ape tiyena waraddak....okata issellama waga kiyanna oni karunasena jayalath...ape kollanta kasada nobanda, premaya wenuwen anda anda inna kiyala igannuwe e peretaya tamai golu hadawata liyala...anyway i dont think this is your personal idea...but i dont like the idea of the poem at all...but as a poem, its very good...

poetically = good
ideologically = very bad

machan umba kiwwane Ideologically very bad kiyala. machan puluwannam therum karapan. Thawa deyak. Golu hadawatha gena thiyena idea eka ganath danaganna kemathiy. Kemathinam Thread ekak unath patan ganna puluwan.

 

[nadeed]

Wow.........itz really great

 

[elakiri0777]

NICE..

 

[aravindalj]

machan.....oka ape tiyena waraddak....okata issellama waga kiyanna oni karunasena jayalath...ape kollanta kasada nobanda, premaya wenuwen anda anda inna kiyala igannuwe e peretaya tamai golu hadawata liyala...anyway i dont think this is your personal idea...but i dont like the idea of the poem at all...but as a poem, its very good...

poetically = good
ideologically = very bad

machan ehenam Viragaye Aravindath ehemane
mama hithanne nehe katawath ehema uganwanna puluwam kiyala
mama sampurnayen ube adahasata viruddai

 

[gumbakabootha]

nice poem..but a little pesimistic quality is there...keep up.....

 

[chico]

great

 

[789]

nice poem

 

[florealworld]

oh............nice work bro.