mata kavi liyanna be මට කවි ලියන්න බෑ

[cj4ever]

matath ohoma kaalayak tibba ban.........

eeta passe apahu liyanan aptan gatta..................

mamath oya vagema thama thamai macho
kalayak navaththala thibila apahu patan gaththe
avurudu 5kvithara kaviyak beluve vath nethi kaalayak thibba

 

[sanka_classic]

Nice One Machan

 

[m doo]

lassanai........

 

[dumira j]

good...
lassanai..

 

[sanfOdian]

ENGLISH TRANSLATION-


You took my smile

you owned my smile.

.................................

.................................

hence now

I can't fill my lines.

 

[chamee777]

NIYAMAI BRO

 

[Malinga]

sanveedi ha hadavathin liyala thiyana nirmanayak. virahavata kavi kohomath liyavenava samaharuntanum. thava samaharunta liyavenne ma nae. kohoma vunath kaviyekutanum aadaraya, virahava kiyanne vachana val dooregalagena yana mathrukaavan. apuru nirmanayak.

 

[cj4ever]

Nice One Machan

thankx macho

 

[cj4ever]

ENGLISH TRANSLATION-


You took my smile

you owned my smile.

.................................

.................................

hence now

I can't fill my lines.

thankx macho english version ekata puluvan full denna balannna

 

[sanfOdian]

thankx macho english version ekata puluvan full denna balannna

cj oka thamai full eka ....blank lines walin kiyawenne mata ewa fill karanna wachana na kiyana eka.....

samahara wita silence ekama hodai wachana dahakata wada

 

[cj4ever]

cj oka thamai full eka ....blank lines walin kiyawenne mata ewa fill karanna wachana na kiyana eka.....

samahara wita silence ekama hodai wachana dahakata wada

ow ow eka aththa
thankx 4 reply

 

[sanfOdian]

But your version is much better than mine.It really express the true nature of a suffering heart.

mata ewage experince nathi hinda ehema liyaganda ba............

 

[zeeyzka]

nice one

 

[iresha_kas]

It's nice but thrs no point in looking back at a thing which is no more there with u......

 

[Amalka101]

Nice ...........but sad
Keep writing

 

[3267]

බෑ කිය කිය ඔය යස අගේට ලියලා තියෙන්නේ.......
ලස්සනයි....!

 

[blacktarzan]

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nice creation - Thanks for sharing with US
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[ronsilva]

oya thiyenne rahata liyala..lassanai ..digatama liyanna...

 

[GOMI]

lassanata liyala thiyenawa...keep it up...!!!

 

[gayani kulathunga]

lassanai