mother:cant finish writing about her

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ravicplk

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guys..
this was the most hardest poem that i have written so far..as i think we cant finish writing about mother....when i finished this one my eyes were wet..so i like to know u r ideas.
 

Malinga

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    aththatama vishishtai. mavakage siyalu guna gayana kirumata pada bandiya haki jagathek me lowa kavaradavath bihi novai. eka gunayak pamanak vuva da kavi dahasa gananakata vasthubeeja sapayanu noanumaanaya. nirmanaye mul kotasa thulinuth pahadili karana ayurin mavakage guna kiyannata uthsaha kirima kana kasebewa viya sidurin ahasa balanna ha samana katauththaki. enamuth mavata athi senehasa nisavenma siya hadavathe mavuna dasa dahasakuth hangum ha porabadimin kavi pada peli atharata mevan sarathaka adahasak ringavannata darana lada uthsahaya ha ehi sarathaka baavaya pasasiya uththaki
     

    ravicplk

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    Malinga said:
    aththatama vishishtai. mavakage siyalu guna gayana kirumata pada bandiya haki jagathek me lowa kavaradavath bihi novai. eka gunayak pamanak vuva da kavi dahasa gananakata vasthubeeja sapayanu noanumaanaya. nirmanaye mul kotasa thulinuth pahadili karana ayurin mavakage guna kiyannata uthsaha kirima kana kasebewa viya sidurin ahasa balanna ha samana katauththaki. enamuth mavata athi senehasa nisavenma siya hadavathe mavuna dasa dahasakuth hangum ha porabadimin kavi pada peli atharata mevan sarathaka adahasak ringavannata darana lada uthsahaya ha ehi sarathaka baavaya pasasiya uththaki
    thx ayya