My day ....

[j2l]

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

Wow.. wow wooooooo….so romantic poem bro..keep it up!!!!

 

[ronsilva]

Brilliant...seems to be that you are in "Romeo Juliet" in your actual life..

great poem malli..I like the verses that you've input... keep it up...

 

[VSGM]

very nice poem!

 

[Java00]

elane

 

[nwnbs]

wOw...sooo romantic bro...keep writing...

 

[~ Hiru ~]

so romantic ..... nice

 

[tchin123]

WOooooooow...Sooooooo Romantic..........

 

[DiLakshika]

yep
its so nice

 

[Doly]

Nice creation joel
verses you hv used is really nice

 

[j2l]

Wow.. wow wooooooo….so romantic poem bro..keep it up!!!!

thanks asoka !

 

[j2l]

Brilliant...seems to be that you are in "Romeo Juliet" in your actual life..

great poem malli..I like the verses that you've input... keep it up...

thanks ron aiyya! there were times where we were like romeo and juliet.... but time the devil jumped in between and slowly separated us.. finally pain is the only thing Now I have.

 

[j2l]

very nice poem!

thanks vsgm !

 

[j2l]

elane

thanks !

 

[j2l]

wOw...sooo romantic bro...keep writing...

thanks machan !

 

[j2l]

so romantic ..... nice

thanks hiru !

 

[j2l]

WOooooooow...Sooooooo Romantic..........

thanks machan !

 

[Amalka101]

Nice creation .......... pretty romantic

 

[ronsilva]

thanks ron aiyya! there were times where we were like romeo and juliet.... but time the devil jumped in between and slowly separated us.. finally pain is the only thing Now I have.

Don't worry malliya.. the devil won't be existing much longer.

god will look after him..you will definitely get a better relief in your heart and your pain will go away in the coming future...

Be strong malliya..

God bless you..

 

[Dj IcE_A]

Nice Poem Bro....Keep it up...