My First Poem ♥ ♥ ♥

[Hayao]

Nice poem bro!

Keep it up.

 

[RuwinRTY]

Nice poem bro!

Keep it up.

thx hayao ayya

 

[tharinda76]

hik.... hik...ela ela

 

[RuwinRTY]

hik.... hik...ela ela

ai ai moko
ai mee hinaa wenne

 

[1118lakmalkumara]

wow nice bro
keep writing

 

[RuwinRTY]

wow nice bro
keep writing

thx bro

 

[h_abeysinghe]

wooooooow!!!!!
uba owa hadana nath awada???

 

[RuwinRTY]

wooooooow!!!!!
uba owa hadana nath awada???

y
ai apita thahanamda ?

 

[ishaahmis]

Hi chooty malliya........first nice poem...kp it up.....my dear

 

[RuwinRTY]

Hi chooty malliya........first nice poem...kp it up.....my dear

hehe thx akki
aayeth liyanne nathi wei

 

[ishaahmis]

hehe thx akki
aayeth liyanne nathi wei

ayyo.... ai a...ehema karanna epa...puluwan welawata liyanna

 

[ela_eluwa120]

Hi Ishaa...how to pronounce your name. It looks like Arabic..

 

[RuwinRTY]

ayyo.... ai a...ehema karanna epa...puluwan welawata liyanna

mata hithunoth thamai akki liyanne
issarahata hithei da danne naa ne

 

[Samantha567]

ela machan....niyamai...hehe

 

[Chrisanthie]

ෂබාෂ් තුම්සේ ප්‍යාර් හෝගයා හෛ ?
පැහැලා ප්‍යාර් ???

 

[Nikkie]

love gives hopes to the lif........ very nice one. keep writing

(And try2 use a difrn font itz bit hard 2 read )

 

[Anjala_88]

Ahh you posted it here nah..But why don't you add few more lines to your poem?Its nice keep writing more malli patz

 

[RuwinRTY]

ela machan....niyamai...hehe

thx bro

ෂබාෂ් තුම්සේ ප්‍යාර් හෝගයා හෛ ?
පැහැලා ප්‍යාර් ???

hi akki
kaalekin dakke
hmmmmmm
laawata theeruna
thaama learnin ne
hehe may b

love gives hopes to the lif........ very nice one. keep writing

(And try2 use a difrn font itz bit hard 2 read )

hehe thx akki (akki wenna oone)
hmmmmm mama dannawa ane font eka clear naa kiyala
eeke hrt's thiyana nisaa eeka use kalee

Ahh you posted it here nah..But why don't you add few more lines to your poem?Its nice keep writing more malli patz

naa akki
mama meeka poem ekak liyanna oone kiyala liwwa nemei
these lines came 2 my mind n i jst wrote them
thx akki

 

[«šLÎm š håÐÿ»]

aaah..Ruwin mallitath lassanata kavi liyanna puluwan ne..
niyamai malliya....

suba pethum...!...

 

[GOMI]

nice 1 malliyooo.keep it up...!