My First poem

[ishanka25]

This is my first poem...I wrote this not for me..I wish don't happen this kind thing to me..

Plzzz meka balala adupadu kiyanna mata...

 

[19830129]

nice

 

[ishanka25]

nice

thanxxx meke adupadu nadda monawath???

 

[789]

lassanai machan
keep it up

 

[ishanka25]

lassanai machan
keep it up

Thanxxxxxxxx brooo

 

[fill_t]

ගොඩක් අඩුපාඩු තියනවා . මෙහෙමයි මල්ලි ලියන්නෙ

Mr. Gangsters it's me fill t up in da track
rolling with da g rap show me where u at
later seen u see my homie with a gat
wet enemies like em work cause of the two legs
i'm g in tha street well known name C
cum pass bitch for having a cream bun
all yo shitz empty and notorious emcees
i'm real OG i got a hit from ma doggfather Snoop D.O double G
P.I.M.P all day in da scene born in da city called P.N.D

 

[Danurp]

realy good.....
ur 1st try is not bad...
Keep it up!!!

 

[ishanka25]

realy good.....
ur 1st try is not bad...
Keep it up!!!

thanxxx sis....

 

[ishanka25]

ගොඩක් අඩුපාඩු තියනවා . මෙහෙමයි මල්ලි ලියන්නෙ

Mr. Gangsters it's me fill t up in da track
rolling with da g rap show me where u at
later seen u see my homie with a gat
wet enemies like em work cause of the two legs
i'm g in tha street well known name C
cum pass bitch for having a cream bun
all yo shitz empty and notorious emcees
i'm real OG i got a hit from ma doggfather Snoop D.O double G
P.I.M.P all day in da scene born in da city called P.N.D

this is a rap neee......

 

[fill_t]

this is a rap neee......

අනෙ sorry bro
කොහෙද මම තාම එ දෙකෙ වෙනස දන්නෑනෙ

එහෙනම් ඔයාගෙ poem is very nice
what about my rap?

 

[ishanka25]

අනෙ sorry bro
කොහෙද මම තාම එ දෙකෙ වෙනස දන්නෑනෙ

එහෙනම් ඔයාගෙ poem is very nice
what about my rap?

yaa it is good.....rap is good..

 

[naleema]

nice malliya---
1st eka godakma hodai
keep it up bro.......

 

[ishanka25]

nice malliya---
1st eka godakma hodai
keep it up bro.......

hehehe thanxx sisi.....

 

[LAPD]

nice one machan, good luck n keep it up

 

[ishanka25]

nice one machan, good luck n keep it up

thanxxxx macho....i'll do it..

 

[ishanka25]

koooooooooooo ape poet la????I need ur comments to future work...........plzzzzzzzzzz

 

[19830129]

they r missing

 

[yazara]

This is my first poem...I wrote this not for me..I wish don't happen this kind thing to me..

Plzzz meka balala adupadu kiyanna mata...

Great work bro...!!
Nice PS work too..!!!
Yo yoo
Now i'm thinking
Why i let you to come to my life... Owa hithanne tibbe issara..Hehe
Giya hakurate naadanne ,Tiyene hakura rakeganne..

 

[||~R_girl~||]

yaaa uve put urs o sm1's feelings n to wrdz realii nicely...!!!! dts great 4 a startr lyk u hehe...
by d way thr r sm grmatical erors dt i noticd..! nywyz keep writin n improvin!

 

[ishanka25]

Great work bro...!!
Nice PS work too..!!!
Yo yoo
Now i'm thinking
Why i let you to come to my life... Owa hithanne tibbe issara..Hehe
Giya hakurate naadanne ,Tiyene hakura rakeganne..

ahhhhhh nangiyooooo oya awada??? mama FB eke oyage wall eke liuwa balanna..I'm Dilaj..