My First poem

pamithK

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  • Jul 21, 2007
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    this is really good for your first poem..nice comparisons.. :)

    but there are a few basic grammar mistakes..other than that its fine :)

    good graphics too
     

    ishanka25

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  • Sep 8, 2007
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    Kasmadumala said:
    isw u r..Pm.dnt angy.vt me.................:D:):):yes:

    nice 1 bro:D:D:d
    v cn understand.wt u rgong 2 say......:D:)
    i'm remembering.same1 tht...in Ek..............
    is ths bilongs 2 her......?.:rolleyes::rilleyes:
    kep it up.....1 attemt succsful.:D:)

    naaaaaaa meka mama sambanda deyak newi..nikan liuwe.....Thanxxxxxxxxxx