MY FIRST PUBLISHED POEM IN ELAKIRI

kudos_utopia

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Hi People!

I typed this poem roughly in 3 minutes

I think this is more like a song :rolleyes:

I just typed this: ;)

Even if this is not good...comment it is good :rolleyes:

Meka ekthara aththa siduweemak wage.....:yes:
me wage 3k withara wela thiyenawa



Why why :confused:
Why do you go away :no:
Why why :oo:
Why do you
(methana poem eka kiyanakota 'you...oooo' kiyala adinna one)


Ya ya....:yes:
Please don't go away :no:
Why why :confused:
Isn't there another way? :eek:


Is this..is this the way :dull:
That girls...were meant to be
(adinna beeeee)
Should we kanna boots...:sorry:
Forever! :(


No, no :no:
Please don't do this to me :sorry:
How many times have I :rolleyes:
Put reload to ur Tigo sim? ;)
(Well actually only twice thamai damme)


Ok...okay ;)
You can go away :yes:
But don't come back :no:
'Coz I will never take you in. :yes:


(Ita passe girl kenek voice over ekak: Ai enneth nehe)


Is the poem okay? :)

:P

 

Djpata

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try to sing it mann!, full fun ekak thiei :D
then add auto tune or smething, make ur voice hear, if it isn't tt clear ;)
upload it to utube and post it hear ... u'll get some cheer with loads of beer :P