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rash87

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hmmm, u r pretty talented kid;)
hahaha it was very gud but I jst feel u jst cud have given more weight on the rythem so it to make more interesting!!!:):)
 

Malinga

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    apuru jeevana dakmakin samanvitha nirmanayak. sarala upamaruupaka mathin jeevithe yatharthayan theerumganeemata labena pituvahala pilibanda lagannasulu vidiyata idiripath karala thiyanava. bohomath aadarshamath nirmanayak.
     

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    sihini said:
    :D :D Dedicated to all the people who suffers from various problems, dnt worry, 4get be possitive:D
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    special thanks 2 Ravi Ayya:D

    atha kathawa nanga,harima lassanai:D :D