Please Come Back!!!

mentor_ub

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I never had no one
that I can count on
we met by a mistake
but we just boke up
with my mistakes...

you are such a blessing
that brought the light
to my darkened life
but you took it back
justleaving me the darkness

yes!I might be a fool
but I always
stand next to you
and I felt the pain you feel
when you start to cry...

I was tired of searching
someone who can trust me
in the end we met
giving an oath
not to depart...

but now you just flying away
leaving the pain for me
and I'll live with that pain
till I see the gates of hell...



(Pls come back S****...I'm waiting for you...these are my own words...:( :( :( )
 

aye_sha90

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mentor_ub said:
I never had no one
that I can count on
we met by a mistake
but we just boke up
with my mistakes...

you are such a blessing
that brought the light
to my darkened life
but you took it back
justleaving me the darkness

yes!I might be a fool
but I always
stand next to you
and I felt the pain you feel
when you start to cry...

I was tired of searching
someone who can trust me
in the end we met
giving an oath
not to depart...

but now you just flying away
leaving the pain for me
and I'll live with that pain
till I see the gates of hell...



(Pls come back S****...I'm waiting for you...these are my own words...:( :( :( )



ooooh.. sweeeeeeeet
 

Doly

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WOW...............u become a poet?

its great...........but y this pain? you should happy my dear...
coz u found her finally,

hey hey i feel to reply this by a poem,

may I?
 

mentor_ub

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Doly said:
WOW...............u become a poet?

its great...........but y this pain? you should happy my dear...
coz u found her finally,

hey hey i feel to reply this by a poem,

may I?
Sure....;) :D :D :D
 

Elysium

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  • Sep 18, 2007
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    Horizon!
    wowee a nice poem though it's a sad poem:)
    'to my darkened life
    but you took it back
    justleaving me the darkness'
    'I felt the pain you feel
    when you start to cry'
    'I was tired of searching
    someone who can trust me'
    hm these verses r really great touching bro they r really revealing ur expectation;)
    & it's really giving happy cuz she came back;)
    thanks 4 sharing this poem with us:D is this ur 1st plot?