uhox said:
hm..
sivu pada (quartern poem) saha nisades (free verse) thiye
eth graphic use karala karana "drushya kavi" (visual poetry) nehe...
samahara kavi waladi sivu padaya saha nisadesa mishrawa bavitha wenawa..
eka nisa oya taragaya karanna yodagena thiyena vargeekarana kramaya etharam sarthaka nehe kiyala hithenawa..
kavya wargeekaranayath hariyata ara jathin athara arbuda wage..Godak sanyamayen karanna ona deyak. Taragayedi bavitha karana mana (poetry scanning tools ) monawada??
namuth meka positive arambayak ...
Uhox Bro... dunnu adahas walata bohooma sthuthii...! eth methana oya kiyana tharan geburin tharagaya karanan widiyak nehe ,....mokada meke kavi liyanen jeewitheta kaviyak liyala nethi aya....samaharu nisadasek ha sew padayaka wenas wath hariyata danne nehe.... methanadi api meka karanna hithan inna widiya anuwa grapihic poems wage echcha loku area ekakta yanna amarui.......
meka ansha dekakata beduweth meaka patan gaththata passe... mulinma adahasa awa welawe api mechchara deyak bala poroththu une nehe... eth den tharage tikaka sankiirna wegena yanne... e wagema liyana hemoma kavi walata aluth aya hinda wedi balapeemak eyalata karannath behe.....eyalata nidahase thamanta kemathi widiyaka deyak liyanna kiyalai kiuwe... apita uwamana karanen liyanna pelabaweema misak wena deyak newei