reply to>වැලි මිරිකීම a.k.a ආදරය සිරකිරීම

[ravicplk]

reply to>වැලි මිරිකීම a.k.a ආදරය සිරකිරීම

i am loosing my likeness of writing poems, poems make me happy,poems make me sad.
anyway
this is a reply to xpert ayyaz poem yesterday, and this is my view, i wrote this one in a hurry so not at its best,
this is the link to xpert ayyas poem.

 

[pamithK]

ekata nam mama wiruddai..sira kara thabeemen rasa haa guna adu wenawa.(sio2 wala nowunath)...

eka nikan kate bath guliyak thiyaagena innawa wage..rasa adu wenawa..

 

[ravicplk]

ekata nam mama wiruddai..sira kara thabeemen rasa haa guna adu wenawa.(sio2 wala nowunath)...

eka nikan kate bath guliyak thiyaagena innawa wage..rasa adu wenawa..

hmm wenna puluwan,,eth mee mata hituna deee..mata hituna deyak pamanail.hari ho waradi viya haki.

 

[pamithK]

hmm wenna puluwan,,eth mee mata hituna deee..mata hituna deyak pamanail.hari ho waradi viya haki.

aththatama ayya kiyanneth xpa kiya a ekamai..e kiyanne yanna denne nahiwa sira kara gena inna kiyala ehema neda?

 

[Sparxrc]

good one

 

[asta]

kawi ass walata aadaraya kiyana de kothekuth dewal walata upama karanna puluwanda ,neda malli.ee godak hadawath walata aadara widinna sidda unu widiya ,aadaraya dakapu widiya nisa wenna puluwan.nathinam aadaraya gana anith aya kiyapu dewal ahala wenna puluwan.
xpert bro kiyapu widiyata aadaraya wallata sama karala thiyenne aadara samahara ayata ralu athdakeemak una nisa wenna puluwan.eetath wada eya eken pennanne aadaraya kiyana de nidahase thibuna nam thaman laga hamadam thiyewi kiyala.eetath wada aadaraya thaman laga hira kara gena thiya gaththanam ee aadaraya wadi kal thaman laga inne naha kiyala.

 

[ravicplk]

aththatama ayya kiyanneth xpa kiya a ekamai..e kiyanne yanna denne nahiwa sira kara gena inna kiyala ehema neda?

hmm man kiyanne xpet ayya kiwwa dee neme man htianne..eya kiwwe athlata gaththama hair kiyalane,wali hirakaran ine naruwa. man kiyanne adaraya hira karan inna eka gana malli.

 

[pamithK]

hmm man kiyanne xpet ayya kiwwa dee neme man htianne..eya kiwwe athlata gaththama hair kiyalane,wali hirakaran ine naruwa. man kiyanne adaraya hira karan inna eka gana malli.

ithin xpa kiyanne me athin haleddi aniken ara ganna kiyalane..habai ey akellek gena kiyanne..ayya aadare gena..ekai wenasa

 

[ravicplk]

eetath wada eya eken pennanne aadaraya kiyana de nidahase thibuna nam thaman laga hamadam thiyewi kiyala.eetath wada aadaraya thaman laga hira kara gena thiya gaththanam ee aadaraya wadi kal thaman laga inne naha kiyala.

oyage poem ekath hodai..

ow eka hari.man kiyanna uthsaha kale habia wena kathawak, man xpert ayyage eken therum gaththe wena deyak nisa wenna puluwan.adaraya nidahas kirima kiyanne mokadda??
eka mata therenne naa..eka poddak kiyanna koo..thanks any way

 

[ravicplk]

ithin xpa kiyanne me athin haleddi aniken ara ganna kiyalane..habai ey akellek gena kiyanne..ayya aadare gena..ekai wenasa

kohomada kiyanne eya girl kenek gana kiyanawa kiyaala,,?
man hithanne eyaht kiyanne adare gana kiyala.

 

[ravicplk]

meka addakimak matha liya wechcha ekak. so meka hamootama adala nowenna puluwan.

 

[pamithK]

kohomada kiyanne eya girl kenek gana kiyanawa kiyaala,,?
man hithanne eyaht kiyanne adare gana kiyala.

ehnam ithin ekama de thama kiyanne

 

[ravicplk]

ehnam ithin ekama de thama kiyanne

mekane eya dakinne eka view port ekakin man dakinne wena ekakin..ekai aula.
any way meka hamotama hari noyanna puluwan.only a experience of me.

 

[x-pert]

Lassana reply ekak Ravi

But mama kiyapu eka ubata hariyata watahila naha wage :S

Mama kiyuwe api laga thiyana aadare neethi reethi daala hira karagena balen wage thiyagaththoth eeka agili assen polowata watila nathi wela yanawa.

Namuth ema aadarema nidahase api laga thiyaagaththoth eeka hamadaamath api laga thiyanawa..

aadare wennath puluwan kellek wennath puluwan dekama ekai ithin.

and mama gaththe sinidu wali mokada boralu kata wage ralu eewa agili assen bimata watenne naha. aadareth eh wagema thamai. sinidu ahinsaka aadarayak neethi reethi daala badala thiyaaganna haduwoth sorry.com. Namuth ralu aadarayak gahala karala lagin thiyaganna puluwan. (Namuth ithin aadare ralu unahama eeka aththatama aadarayakda kiyala mata sakai )

Onna ookai mama aadare sira kireema kiyala adahas kale

 

[ravicplk]

Lassana reply ekak Ravi

But mama kiyapu eka ubata hariyata watahila naha wage :S

Mama kiyuwe api laga thiyana aadare neethi reethi daala hira karagena balen wage thiyagaththoth eeka agili assen polowata watila nathi wela yanawa.

Namuth ema aadarema nidahase api laga thiyaagaththoth eeka hamadaamath api laga thiyanawa..

aadare wennath puluwan kellek wennath puluwan dekama ekai ithin.

ok mata watahuna dan,habai man rely eka kale wena ekak hite thiyagena,
thanks for showing the real meaning.k

 

[maleemsg]

me kiyanne mona widiye adarayak genada?

mata hithenne meke kiyanne XP aiya kaiyana kathawa newei ita wada wenas deyak...!

adaraya hira karala thiyan inna eka rasawath wenne hithe e kiyanne thaman adaraya karanawa eth e adaraya prakasha karanne nethuwa hithe hira karan innawa ehema beluwoth nam ithin adaraya rasa widinna puluwan thamai....

eth dennek athaara adarayakadi ara XP aiya kiyana widiyata hira karala adaraya karanna puluwan saha dennatama samawa e adaraya widinna puluwan wei kiyala nam mama hithanne ne!

 

[sampath312]

මට ටිකක් පැටලිලි සහගතයි ... පොඩ්ඩක් කල්දෙන්න

 

[DJ.Parker]

mehemai macho..........api hari widihata hitiyoth sira karanna wuwamanawak nahane?

sorry if im hurtin ur feelings

 

[asta]

ow eka hari.man kiyanna uthsaha kale habia wena kathawak, man xpert ayyage eken therum gaththe wena deyak nisa wenna puluwan.adaraya nidahas kirima kiyanne mokadda??
eka mata therenne naa..eka poddak kiyanna koo..thanks any way

Malli godak aadarawanthayo ,adarawanthiyo thamange partner ta neethi danwa.oya araya ekka katha karanna epa.....etc ee wage,anna ethakota ee partnerge nidahasa nathi wenawa.eyata thaman kamathi deyak karanna baha anith kena ekata akamathi nam.ethakota ee aadaraya hariyata athe hira karan inna wali mitak wage.habai thamange partner ta neethi danne nathuwa awankawama aadaraya karanawanam ee partner ta nidahasa thiyena kota ee aadaraya aathata yanne naha.nidahasa nathi aadarayaka thiyena kota duras bawak, aadaraya paludu weemak athi wenne puluwan.ethakota nikan ma duras bawak athi wenawa.nidahase thiyena aadaraya ehema aath wenne naha.eka thama lagata thawa kittu wenawa.
hope u understood malli.
xpert bro hope im write abt the idea of ur poem.if not im sry.this is the way i understood............

 

[freednbeing]

මට හිතෙන්නේ රවී XPගෙ කවිය තවත් කීප වතාවක් බලල හදිසි නොවී කවියක් ලිව්වනම් මීට වඩා වෙනස් වෙයි. රවිගේ කවිය කියන්නේ ය.කො.ම.පො. කතාවක් වගේ. අනික XP ගේ හුය බෝංචි වැලක් වෙලා කියල මට හිතුණ. කවියට කමෙන්ට් දෙනවට වඩා offtopic ද මන්දා ඒකෙ වැඩිපුර තිබුණේ. (This is what I felt guys, BTW that's cool too)

ආදරය ගැන රවිගේ මතය ගැන මෙතනින් මම තේරුම් ගත්ත විධිය හරි නම් රවීගේ පෙම්වතියට දෙයියන්ගේ පිහිටයි...

විහිළු ගණන් ගන්න එපා...

ආදරය බලෙන් පොවන්න බෑ. හිර කරල ලබාදෙන්න හෝ ගන්න බෑ. එය පූර්ණව නිදහසේ විඳිය යුතු දෙයක්. ඒක දනවගන්න බෑ. දැණෙන්න ඕන.

මට මගේ ළඟම ඉඳන් වැඩ කරන යාළුවා මතක් වෙනවා... එයාට යෝජනාවක් හරහා සම්බන්ධ වුණ ගෑණු ළමයෙක් ඉන්නවා. ඒ දෙන්නා දැන් හම්බ වෙනවා. ඒත් මූට කිසි හැඟීමක් නෑලු. එයා දැන් හැඟීම් හදාගන්න ට්රයි කරනවා.

කාර්යාලේ අනිත් කට්ටිය ගොඩ වෙදකම් හොයනවා මූට හැඟීම් දනවන්න.