||~~Right leader~~||

[hamish]

Right leader - Hamish
​

It was very tight,
But we ended up winning the fight,
it's time to fly a kite,
To mark our victory with pride and delight

you got a good sight,
Where you see everything bright,
So wake up for your right,
Without sleeping all day and night.

In all the Kingdom,
you got to have the freedom,
To caste your vote,
Considering the gravity of the quote,

Even though you aren't a palm reader,
you have to select the best leader,
So never cast your vote for a trader,
Never let our country be under an invader.
​

Hamish

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[hamish]

need commentz!

 

[crazy91_d]

nice one bro. really nice.

 

[hamish]

nice one bro. really nice.

thankZz

 

[hamish]

bump

 

[Mal Aiyya]

Meken umba kaatada ban chande denna kiyala kiyanne?

mama nam heta kelin ma gihin denne ape DUCK ta

 

[coolgayathra]

niceeeeeee

 

[coollifestyle4u]

Nice Creation Brother..

 

[Arlind]

SF!!!!!!!

 

[hamish]

Meken umba kaatada ban chande denna kiyala kiyanne?

mama nam heta kelin ma gihin denne ape DUCK ta

anyone! its a neutral poem machan!


vote for anyone u like, may be swan or beetle! up 2 u

 

[Mal Aiyya]

anyone! its a neutral poem machan!


vote for anyone u like, may be swan or beetle! up 2 u

I chose the DUCK

quwack qwack..!

 

[hamish]

I chose the DUCK

quwack qwack..!

In all the Kingdom,
you got to have the freedom,
To caste your vote,
Considering the gravity of the quote,


that stanza gives a clear idea i guess!...

 

[nadun07]

So never cast your vote for a trader,
Never let our country be under an invader.

TRUE..
vote 4 MR

 

[Mal Aiyya]

In all the Kingdom,
you got to have the freedom,
To caste your vote,
Considering the gravity of the quote,


that stanza gives a clear idea i guess!...

Ofcourse it does. I just expressed my choice.

 

[Mal Aiyya]

So never cast your vote for a trader,
Never let our country be under an invader.

TRUE..
vote 4 MR

Onna onna ithin ehata mehata ship eka karakanawa..

 

[hamish]

So never cast your vote for a trader,
Never let our country be under an invader.

TRUE..
vote 4 MR

voting is up 2 u mate!

this is a neutral one!

I love writing poemz but hate politics....so thought of writing a neutral one

 

[hamish]

Ofcourse it does. I just expressed my choice.

elaZz

 

[hamish]

Onna onna ithin ehata mehata ship eka karakanawa..

yep, ture!