~~Sinaseeyan Sandawathi~~

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Doly

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Ohhhhhhhhhhhh!
Gangi akki...kalekata passe apuru nirmanayak....
keepa parakma kiyewwa akkiyo..harima lassanai
 

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    නියම සහෝදරත්වයක් මේ කවියෙ තියෙනවා
    හරිම ලස්සනයි:D
    ඒ ඔක්කොටම කාලෙකට පස්සෙ ඔයාව දකින්න ලැබුනු එකත් ලොකූ දෙයක්
    fb වත් ආවෙ නෑනෙ පහුගිය කාලෙ:P
     

    twisted

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    wow long time no see..missed you.

    about the poem, meaningful, abstracted, dressed in fancy words yet easy to understand.
    loved the multiple meaning like thing in first half...i think you've captured the similarity the nature and human emotions shares in negativity and presented both mingled with one another. hehe see mother nature has a human heart.
    good poem hope you will not be gone again lol.
     

    G2H

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    නියම සහෝදරත්වයක් මේ කවියෙ තියෙනවා
    හරිම ලස්සනයි:D
    ඒ ඔක්කොටම කාලෙකට පස්සෙ ඔයාව දකින්න ලැබුනු එකත් ලොකූ දෙයක්
    fb වත් ආවෙ නෑනෙ පහුගිය කාලෙ:P

    mage hodama hodama yaluwata liwwe.. Sathya siduweeemak Asureni ;) :(

    he he awa awa man FB awa.. malline appa penna natthe e patthe.
    kalekin num thama awe..
     

    G2H

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    wow long time no see..missed you.

    about the poem, meaningful, abstracted, dressed in fancy words yet easy to understand.
    loved the multiple meaning like thing in first half...i think you've captured the similarity the nature and human emotions shares in negativity and presented both mingled with one another. hehe see mother nature has a human heart.
    good poem hope you will not be gone again lol.

    Hmm Yeah after some months.. :)

    Aww Thank u 4 de luvly cmnt malliya.. he he yeah true She has a great big Human heart.. :yes:

    will c malli.. :)
     

    ronsilva

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    කාව්‍යමය බස් වහරින් ගෙත්තම් වු අපුරු නිර්මානයක්...

    රහට ලියැවුන ඔබේ නිර්මානය මා ගොඩක් වින්ඳා...

    මම කැමතියි ඉදිරියේදී නංගිගේ නිර්මාන වැඩි වැඩියෙන් දකින්න..

    දිගටම ලියන්න...නංගිට ජය!!
     

    NoWayOut

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    Mulinma meka kiyewwahama mata hithune, obage mithuriyak wenuwen hari, poduwe thama sahurdayeku wenuwen liyana lada nisadesak kiyalay. ithin eke harida kiyala danne oba witharay ne... meka sahodariyek thawa sahodariyakata ho ammek duwata kiyana kaviyak wennath beri ne....

    kohoma hari.. sanda wadipurama upama wenne premanathayak atharane.. ithin wenas themawakin sanda upama karagena kala me nirmanaya apuruy. Obe pathume awanka.. dayabara bawa kaviye wirithe saha padha wala gabwela thiyanawa. Mata penunu sulu waradi deal keepayak kiyannam… “mohothakata hari” kiyana eka wachana dekak wiya yuthuy. E wagema “Nimewee” nathuwa “Niwewee” kiyala yeduwa nam wadath lassanay kiyala hithenawa. Meeta wada tikak clear, lassana font ekak hoya gaththoth thawath lassanata meka present karanna thibba.

    Mage hangeeme saha daneeme hatiyata hoda ho naraka kiyala hithena dewal mama awankawa idiripath kale, obage idiri nirmana walata eya suluwen ho upakaarayak wey kiyana awanka balaporoththuwen…