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Small pain in my chest.....
- Thread starter ronsilva
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hi ..i finally decided to read it anyway. still some words are hard to read for their color.
i think the poem is very well written even though some lines seem to have lost the rythm so that they just appears as lines. but as a whole the idea of a war, which is absolutely destructive and abusive of human nature, is conveyed to the reader thru many aspects a society can be damaged by a death, which is too common for one to take into acount yet, if looked closely, which can be seen clearly in so many broken hearts and dreams which were once bound to the fallen. as in, in his wife's or friends case, the death is not another soldier who died, but a man who was a part of their lives. but i think in a war, this perspective is ruthlessly ignored. that one life has it's value as well, that part which died, as small as it can be yet which had it own world too.
i think the poem is very well written even though some lines seem to have lost the rythm so that they just appears as lines. but as a whole the idea of a war, which is absolutely destructive and abusive of human nature, is conveyed to the reader thru many aspects a society can be damaged by a death, which is too common for one to take into acount yet, if looked closely, which can be seen clearly in so many broken hearts and dreams which were once bound to the fallen. as in, in his wife's or friends case, the death is not another soldier who died, but a man who was a part of their lives. but i think in a war, this perspective is ruthlessly ignored. that one life has it's value as well, that part which died, as small as it can be yet which had it own world too.
twisted said:
Hey thanks bro...you got a lot of talent. Why don't you write something that explains the occurrences of injustice and unfairness in day to day life within our society which is going to be an eye opener for our people in this crucial juncture......
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ronsilva said:
hey no problem.
ive written many but social issues aren't my favorite hehe...eventhough ive written about war a poem or two.
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