Suicide Note - sinhala

twisted

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  • Feb 21, 2008
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    lol i'll make sure u'll LIVE to see another dark and doomish age :rofl:

    i'll be on ym as much as possible. damn i got too much stuff going for me these days. BTW superb words this poem is, i'll let my ideas bout it. when we meet on chat. TC till then :rolleyes:

    lol it can get any darker or gloomier ? dear lord...im so digging further :lol:

    thanks btw..i thought it was a bit monotonous again ..i need change..

    looking forward to catch you soon on chat mate.

    පිස්සු කොර is that u Mr Enlightened :P
    පද ගැලපීම, අදහස උපරිමයි:)

    EK may have suffering due to the heavy loss of good posters and so many things
    But poets thankz to you guys
    Way to go Twisted man cheeres :D

    oh thanks alot mate :) you've always been awfully supportive of my work..
     

    TearDrop

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    Your poem has reached out to me and all that have read it as is shown on the others comments. It is so different, deep and sad.

    It intensely describes the depression covered up inside one’s soul. No one is happy all the time, but some people feel as if they can never find happiness. Some people feel as if their entire life is devoted to nothing but pain and hurt and loneliness. Every day is a struggle, and every breath is a fight for survival. I sincerely hope ,those who have suicidal thoughts would soon realize that it is not the answer to end the suffering but it is only an escape with fear of life.

    Finally I would like to say that this is a truly amazing piece of work on a very difficult subject matter!
     
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    twisted

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    Your poem has reached out to me and all that have read it as is shown on the others comments. It is so different, deep and sad.

    It intensely describes the depression covered up inside one’s soul. No one is happy all the time, but some people feel as if they can never find happiness. Some people feel as if their entire life is devoted to nothing but pain and hurt and loneliness. Every day is a struggle, and every breath is a fight for survival. I sincerely hope ,those who have suicidal thoughts would soon realize that it is not the answer to end the suffering but it is only an escape with fear of life.

    Finally I would like to say that this is a truly amazing piece of work on a very difficult subject matter!

    wow thanks for your wonderful comment :P
    i guess when those all the struggling and pain seems hard to take, suicide, which is an easy escape, wouldn't appear to one who go thru all that, right..cos end to all that should be alot harder than that..not justifying suicide though...but anyway at one point everybody breaks..at one point living is not worth it. i wrote this for fun not for i am suicidal :P thanks again.
     

    Elysium

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    Horizon!

    Thanks for the bump ayya :)


    And twisteddd!!
    this is a beautifulllll poem, the rhyming and the words are really flowing nicely :)
    You were dead and EK is having your ghost da :shocked:
    :lol: yesterday someone told suicide is the only solution :oo:
    I'm glad someone understood that suicide is not the only answer for the problems :)
     

    twisted

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    :D

    Thanks for the bump ayya :)


    And twisteddd!!
    this is a beautifulllll poem, the rhyming and the words are really flowing nicely :)
    You were dead and EK is having your ghost da :shocked:
    :lol: yesterday someone told suicide is the only solution :oo:
    I'm glad someone understood that suicide is not the only answer for the problems :)

    lolz..suicide is beautiful..thanks for your comment :P
     

    kolavari

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    කැළෑ පොජ්ජේ
    අඩෝ ට්විස්ටි උබද බන් මේක ලිව්වේ සිරාවට? පට්ට මචං...ගති..ඉංග්‍රීසියෙන් කොට කොට ඉන්නේ නැතිව මේ වගේ තව දාපන්කෝ :) :)
     
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