~~TaHaNaM GaHa~~

hafeezalantra

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tahanam gaha

Tahanam gaha gadi kavata kamak naha,

balagana , pratipala gadak bayanakaie

a kohama vatata nisadasa lassanaie

vanas. vidihakata ,tiyanava,:no:
 

shakespeare

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    hafeezalantra said:
    Tahanam gaha gadi kavata kamak naha,

    balagana , pratipala gadak bayanakaie

    a kohama vatata nisadasa lassanaie

    vanas. vidihakata ,tiyanava,:no:


    ow eka atta habai eka wenne kohomada kiyana eka prabudddada nattam rukadada kiyala balanna ona
    thanks
     

    rustyc

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    One step away from hell
    hmm...
    good poem...
    msms dakina widihata manushye sanhathiye unmaththaka bawa,puhu adambaraya,anuwana bawa manawin upehasayata,haasyete lak kerela thiyenewa mea creation aken...
    nice try budy....
    keep it up