~~TaHaNaM GaHa~~

[shakespeare]

ME mage Ek eke 8 weni KaWiya....

Me tikaK wens Critical Kawiyak.....

Podi illimak tiyanawa kiyawana ayagen....meka mage point of view eka kiyala ganna epaa...mamA MEKA LIWWE mama Greeka Maha kawya 2 e kiyanne ILIAD saha ODYssy kiyawapu kale....meka lIyala tiyenne E Kaawya wala hitiya RAJA kenek dakina konayen....Ekai adam kataawe TAHANAM GAHA kiyana concept ekai...

e nisaa meka e kawya wala hitapu raja warunge konen balanna....

comments godak watinawaa....

 

[twisted]

ive read illiad a few times but i don't get this lol it's a very nice creation though ..

is it from the point of view of paris? and well..concept of the tree of knowledge of christianity and content in iliad don't get along as i see it
and i don't think zeuz will care if mortals keep virtues or not since he had himself a mistress in illiad lol i hardly recall the story now and i don't have the book with me right now to prefer but well in spite of that its very nice and different poem thanks

 

[RajNOX]

 

[kassaD]

 

[DJAT]

machan poem 1kanam sirawata ela

but macho maken uba invite karanawa anik ayata waradi wadakata needa (Its my wive)??

 

[shakespeare]

ive read illiad a few times but i don't get this lol it's a very nice creation though ..

is it from the point of view of paris? and well..concept of the tree of knowledge of christianity and content in iliad don't get along as i see it
and i don't think zeuz will care if mortals keep virtues or not since he had himself a mistress in illiad lol i hardly recall the story now and i don't have the book with me right now to prefer but well in spite of that its very nice and different poem thanks

yes may be its from paris....but i prefer most of the heros in it have the view as i c....about the additional goda subject i used it wth tat god s a narrator in it.....but i wanted 2 add his charachter as well in the same catagory....so this not a actualy only limited 2 greek legends....it s connected with subject of god and goddes in the ancient middle age time

 

[shakespeare]

machan poem 1kanam sirawata ela

but macho maken uba invite karanawa anik ayata waradi wadakata needa (Its my wive)??

naa machan umbata waradilaa...meka mage request ekak nemei....kawiyata yatin tiyana tika kiyawanna,,,,,meka mage view eka nemei....meka virtual view ekak mawaagena mama liyapu ekak,.....meka invitation ekakuth nemei.,..meka point ekak....critical point eka....readerslage critics e point eka adaala tanata geni yai....ok bro...thanks

 

[twisted]

yes may be its from paris....but i prefer most of the heros in it have the view as i c....about the additional goda subject i used it wth tat god s a narrator in it.....but i wanted 2 add his charachter as well in the same catagory....so this not a actualy only limited 2 greek legends....it s connected with subject of god and goddes in the ancient middle age time

still it's mystery to me bro ..that's not what i got from reading those books lol but well you can alter them i guess and i liked your other poems better ..hehe but thanks

 

[corei7]

nice poem

 

[shakespeare]

still it's mystery to me bro ..that's not what i got from reading those books lol but well you can alter them i guess and i liked your other poems better ..hehe but thanks

yeah may b bro...bro r u familier with psychoanalysis....n its way of thinking....the romantic eraa....post modernity....and the fraction people had in last 2 centuries in exposing the inner sexuality in its way of drive....god is a concept here as i used...whch s called the guilt some times....wel 1st of all i would say this is a very direct call...bro if u try 2 see this poem not only with greek legends...u may get some thing...acutually this is creation of differnt eras and different stories....

wel thanks 4 ur post bro

actually i want readers to make critics abt this and make a discourse

 

[cspmaxx]

WEDE HONDAI MACHAN

 

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Appa maha amuthu kaviyak thamai oya liyala thiyenne..
harima apurui yaluwa...

 

[twisted]

yeah may b bro...bro r u familier with psychoanalysis....n its way of thinking....the romantic eraa....post modernity....and the fraction people had in last 2 centuries in exposing the inner sexuality in its way of drive....god is a concept here as i used...whch s called the guilt some times....wel 1st of all i would say this is a very direct call...bro if u try 2 see this poem not only with greek legends...u may get some thing...acutually this is creation of differnt eras and different stories....

wel thanks 4 ur post bro

actually i want readers to make critics abt this and make a discourse

im not really familiar with that but i think its a nice thought ...im sorry i made you say that lol i know as a poet you dont wna straighten up your points in the poem ..but now it makes more sense..

 

[shakespeare]

im not really familiar with that but i think its a nice thought ...im sorry i made you say that lol i know as a poet you dont wna straighten up your points in the poem ..but now it makes more sense..

wel the story in this poem is differnt from what it contains bro

 

[twisted]

wel the story in this poem is differnt from what it contains bro

i figured so lol

 

[Zeus]

Me kaviya bohoma freely liyala thiyenava neda machan
Mehemayi machan mama greek kavi gananam danne na mata hitenne mehemayi

Api minissu unath samahara velavata apith hasirenne sattu vage
As ex ballek unath tamange ivata misak buddhiyata mul tana denava adune
Ekane lesiyenma kamata visha dala maravanna unath puluvan venne

So manu satha kiyala kiyaganna apith velavakata mehemada manda?
Ivata mul tana and buddhiyata no tana

Me vage honda vistarayak Buddhism vala aggaghaka sutrayeth vistara venava ( as i knw)

Niyamayi kollo umbe tiyenneth amutuma style ekak keep it up macho

 

[sudheera]

eal ela maru

 

[shakespeare]

Me kaviya bohoma freely liyala thiyenava neda machan
Mehemayi machan mama greek kavi gananam danne na mata hitenne mehemayi

Api minissu unath samahara velavata apith hasirenne sattu vage
As ex ballek unath tamange ivata misak buddhiyata mul tana denava adune
Ekane lesiyenma kamata visha dala maravanna unath puluvan venne

So manu satha kiyala kiyaganna apith velavakata mehemada manda?
Ivata mul tana and buddhiyata no tana

Me vage honda vistarayak Buddhism vala aggaghaka sutrayeth vistara venava ( as i knw)

Niyamayi kollo umbe tiyenneth amutuma style ekak keep it up macho

meka buddhist widiyata gattoth machh mehemai....

Budu hamuduruwo kiyala tiyana widiyata manussa hita kiyana de harima avinishchita deyak....budda kale indiawe taram me dewal gana represent wechch aarya sanskrutiyak tibbe naa wena kawadawath,....budu hamuduruwo wasala sutraya deshanaa kale oya nisaa....meka hari amu kawiyak...hariyata amu minis hitak wage..amu hitakata sathwa sitak kiyana eke maha loku wenasakuth naa...


thanks bro

 

[shakespeare]

 

[shakespeare]