.....The Rain .....

[j2l]

 

[nwnbs]

meka godak lassanai yaaluwa... kiyawagena yanakota lassanata denenawa...

 

[j2l]

meka godak lassanai yaaluwa... kiyawagena yanakota lassanata denenawa...

thanks yalu .. hamadama wage .. obage adahas dakweema mma agaya karami ...

 

[Doly]

RAIN..........
The imagery and the words you used to describe your emotions where amazing.
This was different and sweet. I enjoyed it very much. You managed to change my mine about these type of writes. You were creative with an excellent flow and rhyme.
VERY CREATIVE WRITING

EXCELLENT ONE JOEL

 

[j2l]

RAIN..........
The imagery and the words you used to describe your emotions where amazing.
This was different and sweet. I enjoyed it very much. You managed to change my mine about these type of writes. You were creative with an excellent flow and rhyme.
VERY CREATIVE WRITING

EXCELLENT ONE JOEL

thanks doly nanga ...thanks for the appreciation ...

 

[Kasmadumala]

The words you used to describe your feelings simply wow..........
keep it up..........
tasted it nicely....

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

this is ma feel bro.. u are very close to environment isn’t it? I enjoyed ur creation more than u described…good luck bro..keep it up!!

 

[j2l]

The words you used to describe your feelings simply wow..........
keep it up..........
tasted it nicely....

thanks brother ..!

 

[j2l]

this is ma feel bro.. u are very close to environment isn’t it? I enjoyed ur creation more than u described…good luck bro..keep it up!!

thanks hemantha ... ya quit frankly.. I enjoy natural sceneries more than anyother ... thanks again for the comment !

 

[DiLakshika]

I too enjoyed ur creation brother
simply Superb

 

[kkroxc]

is this ur creation who is w a d joel

 

[Planthis]

???...Joel bro..
Where's the poem?

 

[j2l]

is this ur creation who is w a d joel

yes machan this is mine ... j2l = W.A.D. Joel Lennon ...

 

[j2l]

???...Joel bro..
Where's the poem?

y cna't u see it ??????.. poem is there bro ...

 

[Dinuka888]

beautifully expressed machan
i like this

 

[nelik]

ela machan ..... nubata jaya

 

[dinukap4]

RAIN..........
The imagery and the words you used to describe your emotions where amazing.
This was different and sweet. I enjoyed it very much. You managed to change my mine about these type of writes. You were creative with an excellent flow and rhyme.
VERY CREATIVE WRITING

EXCELLENT ONE JOEL

Because this aki told its cool i read it normaly i don't ,wow it was a good one

 

[j2l]

ela machan ..... nubata jaya

thanks malli !

 

[j2l]

Because this aki told its cool i read it normaly i don't ,wow it was a good one

thanks malli.... !

 

[harintheman]

patttaa machan maree flow ekak thiyene elate yanewaa maxxaaa