to someone very special :love:

sanfOdian

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around myself..
hey i dont know how i miss this one...:(

anyway this is a very good start nanga...but i remember i saw some bits & pieces of your earlier creations...especially I remember the one you describe love :)


you have used rhyming words ,but still you have manage to keep the idea tighter...see here
"friendship can be something great
but when it turns to love its fate
"


also in here you haven't been afraid to break that when it's necessary..
"so follow your dreams
and dont let go
but one day youll find
your true loves soul
"


really you got talent on poetry.:)
keep it up.
 

iresha_kas

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What I think is Love & Friendship should never be mixed up.... Coz if u loose ur love you will loose your frindship tooooo....... It's a thing which is soo hard to forget nad move on....
 

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prabani_princess said:
:love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

friendship can be something great
but when it turns to love its fate
so follow your dreams
and dont let go
but one day youll find
your true loves soul
This is true..
Nice poem sis..Keep on writing!!!!!!!!!:D:D:D:yes::yes::yes:
 

twisted

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    it's nicely writen i should say ..my advise to you is don't limit yourself to one theme alone ..keep writing you go on you get better as you go along ..that's common to everybody