Boman said:sure ma sure![]()
dakkane boman la wadakarayo
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ow ow man nodannawaye umba wada karaya bawa 
)bohoma sthuthi uhox aiyauhox said:hmm
sengawuna aruthak thiyena sanwedi nirmanayak

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ow ow man nodannawaye umba wada karaya bawa
(man kiuwe kanamadaya wage kana palenna bonna puluwan kiyala)


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ithin okata irisiya karanna onai.
umba bisaw nawanawa wage thamai apith.sanga unu kusalatha atha apatath![]()
sahaja dakshatha nadda ban

Boman said:bohoma sthuthi uhox aiya![]()

eekane ban..umba ee paththen..mama me paththenG-Force said:![]()
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sahaja dakshatha nadda ban
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api thawath mewa wardhanaya kara gamu

mage hithe kaleka indan thibba adahasak thamai aiya kiuwe...uhox said:uthprasaya thiyala hondata rachanaya karala thiyenawa.....
meweni keti kavi ekathu kara, vivida rupaka bawithakara, ....wada dirga padya rachanayatath uthsaha karanna. Mahagamasekarage bodima wage kavya nirmana obatath kala hekiya manda Oba hekiyawa thiyena kaviyek bewini...
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mage adahasak thiyanawa boho wita mama liyana padya peli 3,4 kawi wenuwata tharamak diga kaawya nirmanayak karanna. aduma tharame pothaka pitu 5ka wath ekak
honda nimiththak hoyamin thamai inne ekata paadaka karaganna.Boman said:eekane ban..umba ee paththen..mama me paththenapi thawath mewa wardhanaya kara gamu
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ane amme umba gawa tiyenne marum kana idea ne

Boman said:mage hithe kaleka indan thibba adahasak thamai aiya kiuwe...mage adahasak thiyanawa boho wita mama liyana padya peli 3,4 kawi wenuwata tharamak diga kaawya nirmanayak karanna. aduma tharame pothaka pitu 5ka wath ekak
honda nimiththak hoyamin thamai inne ekata paadaka karaganna.
ha haaG-Force said:ane amme umba gawa tiyenne marum kana idea ne
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api mewa pm magin sakachcha karamu 

ow ayya eeka thamai...kal aragena karanna one wadak.uhox said:nimitthak soyagennema apahasu wena ekak nehe...Awashaya rupaka saha gala yama (flow of the poem) soyageneema saha nimitthata sapekshiwa yoda geneema thama getaluwa..
eth uthasaha kaloth karanna beri deyak ne neda?
ara sahithya thread eka wenama EK eke patan gannawa kiwa neda? Nikini nangi & GTRZ egena kiwa...Kawadada eka karanne?

karya bahulathwaya nisa obage nirmanayak dakinna nolabeema aththatama kanagatuwata karunak
umbe poems kawadada malli naraka une..wenadawagema lassana ekak wenna athi..balamu balamu..ikmanta daannaravicplk said:heheee..man adath poem ekak liyanawa..thawa tikakin dannam...think it will be a good one.

Boman said:ha haa![]()
api mewa pm magin sakachcha karamu
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ow ow nathnam mehema yaddi thawa mona kiyaweida danne na

Boman said:ow ayya eeka thamai...kal aragena karanna one wadak.
me dawas wala gtrz tikak karya bahulai mama hithanne.. ee nisa mata wadiya kathakaranna bari una ee gana...kohoma unath uhox aiya sahena sahayogayak dei kiyala hithenawa eekata. mokada kaawyakaranaya gana api kaatath wada honda danumak thiyana kenek thamai oyakarya bahulathwaya nisa obage nirmanayak dakinna nolabeema aththatama kanagatuwata karunak
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