WAR

[Nash_Node]

As I walk through the rubble
of what once was a great church
hearing the echo of dying hymns of the past
The smouldering debris
Of a once so sophisticated civilization

As I turn the corner to what once was a school
The once so noisy courtyard, eerily silent
With the touch of death settling upon it

Technology leads to power
Power leads to greed
Greed creates resentment
Resentment breeds hate
Hate Breeds war
War breeds destruction


For all your war mongers both Political starting from Chinthanaya to JVP to JHU and all you civilian bastard air headed arm chair warriors.... SCREW YOU !

 

[maleemsg]

NAsh is that you????

a poem composed by yourself???? unbeliveble...!
but yes I do..!

now i know why you hate love poems and all....!

you are looking for something down to earth......rather than emortional poems and all...!

keep it up bro...!

like to read more from you..!

 

[Nash_Node]

Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil.

 

[Kafir]

As I walk through the rubble
of what once was a great church
hearing the echo of dying hymns of the past
The smouldering debris
Of a once so sophisticated civilization

As I turn the corner to what once was a school
The once so noisy courtyard, eerily silent
With the touch of death settling upon it

Technology leads to power
Power leads to greed
Greed creates resentment
Resentment breeds hate
Hate Breeds war
War breeds destruction


For all your war mongers both Political starting from Chinthanaya to JVP to JHU and all you civilian bastard air headed arm chair warriors.... SCREW YOU !

Peace Monger of the year

 

[Nash_Node]

Peace Monger of the year

ouch, did the last line hurt you?

 

[Asitha-K]

Wow damn man ! that was amazing!
great poem man!

This recall my memory about that "Art of War thread!"

 

[Kafir]

ouch, did the last line hurt you?

Did the first line hert uuuuu ????

 

[Nash_Node]

Did the first line hert uuuuu ????

if you are talking about the Poem - yes

if you are talking about your comment - I smirked !

google the meaning

 

[Kafir]

Peolpe with different ideas and view points.
U called somebody to War mongers and somebody may see u as a Peace monger
How nice the democrucy

 

[Boman]

Nash node and poems like malee said.. unbelieveable
Nice poem nash.
Poem is really nice
But I like this part most
"For all your war mongers both Political starting from Chinthanaya to JVP to JHU and all you civilian bastard air headed arm chair warriors.... SCREW YOU !"

 

[howitzer]

Peolpe with different ideas and view points.
U called somebody to War mongers and somebody may see u as a Peace monger
How nice the democrucy

hey what the hell you mean by peace monger?
please, if you hate peace that much at least keep quite.
sorry for not commenting on the poem.(well all im doing is saluting you for looking at war in such a point of view Mr.writer)

 

[Nash_Node]

Nash node and poems like malee said.. unbelieveable
Nice poem nash.
Poem is really nice
But I like this part most
"For all your war mongers both Political starting from Chinthanaya to JVP to JHU and all you civilian bastard air headed arm chair warriors.... SCREW YOU !"

nothing to be wondering about mate.

But I guess I will never get that
"harima lassana, aruth bara sithuwillak.........or.......wishishtai, harima prayogika hangeemak thiyena sundara kavi pelak......comments"

 

[Boman]

nothing to be wondering about mate.

But I guess I will never get that
"harima lassana, aruth bara sithuwillak.........or.......wishishtai, harima prayogika hangeemak thiyena sundara kavi pelak......comments"

Im pretty sure u wont
becos of the line that i hav mentioned

 

[Nash_Node]

Im pretty sure u wont
becos of the line that i hav mentioned

that's why said this

Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil.

 

[x-pert]

Nash you can write poems bro

(Nice thought )

 

[Ansh]

Nice Poem Bro!!! Keep Up The Gud Work !!!!

 

[sampath312]

i dont have a huge English knowledge but with the help of www.dictionary.com I think I could feel total meaning of you poem bro....but I love this part bro which nicely presents how we all leaded to here where we sitting in this තම්බපන්නී land while nice fireworks going over ma head which are called para, and nice vibration feeling to ma ears from the side of the manar

Technology leads to power
Power leads to greed
Greed creates resentment
Resentment breeds hate
Hate Breeds war
War breeds destruction

hats off bro...stunning

 

[sampath312]

bro i thought this song suit here the most..but Im sorry if this spoiled the true feeling of yours..

BROTHERS IN ARMS

Sampath

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

Aha really nice bro..... keep it up..

IM SICK OF DIS DUMB WAR!!

 

[pamithK]

NAsh is that you????

a poem composed by yourself???? unbeliveble...!
but yes I do..!

now i know why you hate love poems and all....!

you are looking for something down to earth......rather than emortional poems and all...!

keep it up bro...!

like to read more from you..!

nash ayya mage advice aran wage

anyway great stuff dude..wonderful vocabulary..you bring out the message perfectly..keep 'em coming