Wraith [poem]

[truth4L]

i thought of sharing this with you guyz..
i knw it sucks..bt this is the second poem i'm posting on EK...so i'm just an amateur...there cud be many errors

 

[Doly]

Nice Creation Brother...

 

[truth4L]

Nice Creation Brother...

thnx doly akki..

 

[thm14]

ahhh!! so you ve put it at last...
max machan!! keep em coming

 

[truth4L]

ahhh!! so you ve put it at last...
max machan!! keep em coming

lol umba kiyapu nisaa demma..
hehe..thanx machan..

 

[ronsilva]

The vocabulary that you've used within this entire poem is so fantastic. it has a cinematic flow...

you have a good vision of writing poems.....you may be an amateur to you...but nevertheless you have proven to me that you are an experienced creator.

keep it up malliya...

 

[isuruimg]

ela machn digatama daapan nice one

 

[NoWayOut]

Good stuff... don't worry we are all ametuers here. you have been able to paint the picture you wanted in the readers mind, as that's what it is all about. you have the talent, and don't let it die.... keep 'em coming..

 

[Amalka101]

Nice Creation..... Its really nice
Never underestimate your talents bro, it doesn't suck.... but pretty cool

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

nice creation bro... keep it up!!