Injurious Mind (හිංසක සිත)

[chintha4u]

 

[nwnbs]

හ්ම්ම්ම්...ටිකක් අමරුයි තේරුම් ගන්න...එහෙන් මෙහෙන් තෙරුනා...අනේ මන්දා...
නිර්මාණය නම් ලස්සනයි...

 

[Doly]

bit complicated.i dnt knw y
Mula tika teruna .......end of the poem

anyway very nice creation dear Brother

 

[nwnbs]

bit complicated.i dnt knw y
Mula tika teruna .......end of the poem

anyway very nice creation dear Brother

end of the poem තමයි මටත් ප්‍රශ්නෙ...

 

[aravindalj]

hodai

 

[nmps]

Lassana Poem ekak MCN
HAbai hitaa ganna tikak amaarui

 

[dulhari]

chintha.... meka nam godak bayanakai.... eeth nirmanaya sarthakai.... mama hithanawa oyata thama mehema manasaknam awith naa kiyala....

 

[sl_pissa]

hmmm..lil bit horror..some thing to think more and I m still thinking..good work buddy

 

[ronsilva]

ගැ‍ඹු‍ර‍ පස‍ක්‍ ක‍ර‍ ගැ‍නී‍ම‍ට‍ ඉ‍ඩ දී‍ කි‍ය‍වන්නා‍ගේ‍ සි‍තේ‍ නි‍රන්‍ත‍ර‍ කු‍හු‍ල‍ උ‍පද්‍දන අ‍යු‍රි‍න්‍ ලි‍ය‍න‍ ලද‍ සා‍ර්ථක නි‍ර්‍මා‍න‍ය‍ක්‍...

ඔ‍බ‍ට‍ ජ‍ය‍!!

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

saho..3rd part ekey idala... gupta bawak danenawa.. danney na.. y kiyala... 1k obey hakiyawa wenna athi.. keep it up...

 

[j2l]

tikk wenas widiyaka nirmanayk ... lassanai sahodaraya .....

 

[chintha4u]

හ්ම්ම්ම්...ටිකක් අමරුයි තේරුම් ගන්න...එහෙන් මෙහෙන් තෙරුනා...අනේ මන්දා...
නිර්මාණය නම් ලස්සනයි...

end of the poem තමයි මටත් ප්‍රශ්නෙ...

bit complicated.i dnt knw y
Mula tika teruna .......end of the poem

anyway very nice creation dear Brother

Lassana Poem ekak MCN
HAbai hitaa ganna tikak amaarui

ඇත්තටම ගත්තොත් අවසාන පේලිය තමා කවියෙ හදවත. මේක මතුපිටින් සුන්දරයි වගේ පෙනුනට ඇතුලෙ ටිකක් දරුණු දෙයක් තමා තියෙන්නේ. කවියෙ මුව තුඩග කියන තැනින් තමා සැගවිච්ච අදහස අල්ලන්න පටන් ගන්න ඕන.

 

[twisted]

you sick bastard lol i wont say the meaning here. good poem. btw dont make it tooo abstract give us readers a clue or two to make something out. well i know there are a few ..but they are still so faint.

 

[twisted]

all right i changed my mind ....what you've written suffices to interpret it. and know the meaning, it perfectly makes sense now when i read it again.

stay evil brother lulz

 

[chintha4u]

hodai

Thnanks machan....

 

[chintha4u]

chintha.... meka nam godak bayanakai.... eeth nirmanaya sarthakai.... mama hithanawa oyata thama mehema manasaknam awith naa kiyala....

lol. naththeth naa. ekek innawa Mano kiyala. ahuwenakam inne.

 

[akolla]

all right i changed my mind ....what you've written suffices to interpret it. and know the meaning, it perfectly makes sense now when i read it again.

stay evil brother lulz

you sick bastard lol i wont say the meaning here. good poem. btw dont make it tooo abstract give us readers a clue or two to make something out. well i know there are a few ..but they are still so faint.

i don't think you grasp it at all mate. just like to know what it meant to you.

besides, for me this sounds a very common theme if am not misinterpret it.

 

[nwnbs]

මිනී මැරුමක්ද...???

 

[twisted]

i don't think you grasp it at all mate. just like to know what it meant to you.

besides, for me this sounds a very common theme if am not misinterpret it.

um actually the one who wrote this kind of told me the story..i wouldnt have interpreted it right anyway for the lack of clues behind his actually idea..but however i can see if ppl give this a different meaning for it's ultra abstractness and obscurity. ...isn't that the beauty of it anyway.

 

[akolla]

but however i can see if ppl give this a different meaning for it's ultra abstractness and obscurity. ...isn't that the beauty of it anyway.

exactly, it lies the beauty there. that's why am asking you, what in difference or in advance you see in it from the others?