Leaving Heaven (sinhala)

[twisted]

awwww, nice poem ayya .....abstract one ..thnx for sharing.

Keep writing.

thanks alot for the comment nangi

 

[kassaD]

අවා...කවිය පේන්නෙ නැ

 

[twisted]

අවා...කවිය පේන්නෙ නැ

ooops may be imageshacks down ...can't help it since the edit option is gone..sorry about that.

 

[Amalka101]

යාන්තම් ඇති කවිය කියවගත්තා

අපූරු නිර්මානයක් ටුවිස්ටියො ........ උපරිමයි
දිගටම ලියන්න

 

[twisted]

යාන්තම් ඇති කවිය කියවගත්තා

අපූරු නිර්මානයක් ටුවිස්ටියො ........ උපරිමයි
දිගටම ලියන්න

thanks thought it was gone forever thanks for the comment nangi.

 

[Zeus]

Damn man I almost forget ur capabilities as good poet
Nice man. Just keep writing
may god be with ya

excuse all the spelling mistakes..

වාක්‍යක් පටංගන්නෙ කැපිටල් අකුරුවලින් කියලවත් දන්නෙ නැද්ද ?

 

[twisted]

Damn man I almost forget ur capabilities as good poet
Nice man. Just keep writing
may god be with ya



වාක්‍යක් පටංගන්නෙ කැපිටල් අකුරුවලින් කියලවත් දන්නෙ නැද්ද ?

ironic since this is about losing faith ...thanks for your lovely green comment.

 

[numesh]

good

 

[twisted]

good

thanks

 

[¤--bACarDi--¤]

bad

 

[twisted]

bad

amen

 

[kovida_xp]

Nice.....thats all I can say though...I suck at these....why dont you ''compose'' something next time...so I can be more specific..

 

[twisted]

Nice.....thats all I can say though...I suck at these....why dont you ''compose'' something next time...so I can be more specific..

thanks for the comment lol nobdy had much to say anyway ..ill stick to writing

 

[සුදු රෝස]

Kiyawapu palaweni kaviyatama aasa hithuna.... lassanai...

 

[kudos_utopia]

nice bro
hey moko kastiya oyaagen first name eka kiyala katha karanne?

hey Twisted..do u understand the meaning of the poem u wrote?...hmmm...u can write so well....even thought you can't even understand ...

hey nice nice poem..picture is also somewhat okay..nice

 

[twisted]

Kiyawapu palaweni kaviyatama aasa hithuna.... lassanai...

thank you for resurrecting a dead thread lol..

nice bro
hey moko kastiya oyaagen first name eka kiyala katha karanne?

hey Twisted..do u understand the meaning of the poem u wrote?...hmmm...u can write so well....even thought you can't even understand ...

hey nice nice poem..picture is also somewhat okay..nice

i have no idea lol course i know the meanings of my own poems..well atleast right after i wrote them
thanks for your comment
kudos.