lol... like i told ya... charitha dekata "pana" nae kiyalath man dannawa, kathawak kiyalath man dannawa... man meka kiyawanne nam aththatama kathawak hatiyata... and i hav to tell ya i like ur writing style... its quite unique and catchy.. i think ur a skilled writer and if u wanted to u can do something real with that... mehema forum ekaka kathawak nemei oyaata aththatama novelist kenek wenna wunath puluwan... that's all i have to say about this STORY of urs.
and nanga, i think u know very well Why i said what i said in my earlier comment
meke charitha walata pana powanna mage kisima adahasak nae... ehema deyak karanna haduwanam kenek eyatath kiyanna oona eka man kiyala athi... IF there are real ppl behind any of these purely FICTIONAL characters, e real kattiya man godak aadare karana aya (and that includes u darling). me charitha walata pana pewwoth hema charithayakma ghathanaya wennath ida thiyenawa

and i dont wanna see that happen to any of them, specially the main girl... ok? so i hope u understand what i mean..
this will be my last comment here (unless i'm terribly provoked later)
liyanawada nadda kiyana eka oyaage athe, eth as long as u keep writing i will keep reading - just for the enjoyment of the story... because i dont need this story to know the reality and to love the real ppl