මෙහෙම කියන අවුලක් නැද්ද?

[Aruna119]

මෙහෙම කියන අවුලක් නැද්ද?

a sweet dance between two people who are lost in each other is a lovely thing to see.

A sweet dance between two people who stranded in each other's hearts is a lovely thing to see.

මේ දෙකෙන් මොකක්ද හොඳ?

 

[Aruna119]

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[Aruna119]

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[silentsahan]

Kosandpol

wa contact karanna..

 

[kosandpol]

a sweet dance between two people who are lost in each other is a lovely thing to see.

A sweet dance between two people who stranded in each other's hearts is a lovely thing to see.

මේ දෙකෙන් මොකක්ද හොඳ?

1st line is better.


Perhaps, you can amend it as below:
a sweet dance between a couple lost in each other is a lovely thing to see

 

[silentsahan]

1st line is better.


Perhaps, you can amend it as below:
a sweet dance between a couple lost in each other is a lovely thing to see

yako mu balapanko..
kiyana parakkuwata awith

 

[kosandpol]

yako mu balapanko..
kiyana parakkuwata awith

eh ?

 

[silentsahan]

eh ?

dan ithin apiwa mathaka naha neda..
issara api hoda yaluwo wela unna..
4keven4, mathara kibmula ehema inna kale..

 

[kosandpol]

dan ithin apiwa mathaka naha neda..
issara api hoda yaluwo wela unna..
4keven4, mathara kibmula ehema inna kale..