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Anjala_88

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ƃuoႨәq ! әɹәႡʍәɯos
bohoth kushi hain. lagtha hain purana dosti milgaya :)
ham ko nahi mila hindika bath sakthi yaar EK me.
thum ka awaas achcha hain Ajnabi. phir check karo thumhara image.:)
hum nahi dekha vo :eek:

Mujhe bi aap milke bohoth achcha laga Kyun Dreamz Bhaai hena wo tho Hindhi me baath karti hu.Aaap or sablogg mera other image ko reply kardiya he :lol::lol:

2b frank i don't get t ...

Why chck my 2nd post
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Anjala_88

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ƃuoႨәq ! әɹәႡʍәɯos
මම හිතන්නෙ නැ මෙක ඔයගෙ එක්ස්පීරියන්ස් 1ක් කියලා .. :පී
Meka mage experience ekak neme man issarahata dannamko tawa tawa ewa wagayak oka me mita awrudu 1ta kalin liyapuwa :) magen kenek illeemak kala mage e kawi danna kiyala balanna asai kiyaala.eya wenuwen danme :D Nisedesak liyanna ewage athdakeemak tiyenne one ma na minissunta wena dewal dakkama e hodatama ati :dull:

ps: Oya dannawane man boot kanne nati bawa lol :P
 

twisted

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    upon purple clouds
    ok now i can see it.

    its not bad...but the idea has been repeated in poems all the time so its not unique..not saying you must make it sound unique but its just too cliche. hmm and write something longer..dig out your heart..and do keep writing, more words always make you better good luck. and its beautiful.
     

    X men

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    noʎ ɯoɹɟ ʎɐʍɐ ɹɐɟ
    Mujhe bi aap milke bohoth achcha laga Kyun Dreamz Bhaai hena wo tho Hindhi me baath karti hu.Aaap or sablogg mera other image ko reply kardiya he :lol::lol:

    haa. phir mujse galath huwa.:(
    thumhara dreams bhai hindi me bhath sattha hu. waah waah :rofl:
    didi..hum choti time keliye BRB hoone jahiye :dull:
    aaj hum bohoth kaaam kiya :dull: tired hain.
    raath main ayega. thum jaanthi hu :rofl: neend nahi athe hum sab koo raath ka.:lol: EK paas rehena hain sab raath main :lol:
    Hum gaya. Namaskaar. :)
    Phir milege :)
     

    thilangr8

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    හෝම් ස්වීට් හෝම්
    Meka mage experience ekak neme man issarahata dannamko tawa tawa ewa wagayak oka me mita awrudu 1ta kalin liyapuwa :) magen kenek illeemak kala mage e kawi danna kiyala balanna asai kiyaala.eya wenuwen danme :D Nisedesak liyanna ewage athdakeemak tiyenne one ma na minissunta wena dewal dakkama e hodatama ati :dull:

    hari hari dan pahadili okkoma mula indan ....
    keep postin sis :D:D
     

    Dreams001

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    Hai angle me abhi deka aapka poem...merako bohoth pasand hua..lekin eek bathuwo aap merako kahadiya ye anjabi naamka kuch problem hey aap ke poem lekne keliye...aaj ab ye poem idhar daal dhiya..kiyu? Lekin merako aab ka dhoosra naam bohoth pasand huwa.Wo naya ID.Plz try karo ye ID banene keliye.

    As i tld b4 aapka sab creations merako accha lagthaaha..and best of luck!