~ හොදටෝම ඇති දැන් ~

[Vathu]

Hodai aththatama hodai ..........

 

[ChuttaFX]

a little bit harder to read some parts.

anyway really really true. nice poem sis.

 

[induru sanjeewa]

wow ,hari lassanaine,oayath hodata mole thiyenawa wage hehe

 

[Doly]

Ow nanga.. hamotama dos kiyanawata wada nagitinna uthsaha karanawanum.. nagitinna nagitinna apiwa wattanna hadana ayata thereyi api watenne ne kiyala aye aye nagitinawa kiyala..

Hoda nirmanayak nangi

Thank you akkiyo

 

[Doly]

Menna magenuth podi talluwak nagitinna….
Apo..me kellage baraaaa………

thanks aiye
hariyatama 46 KG

wadida??

 

[kassaD]

nice poem minu....attatama godak arthawath saha lassanai...kenek hamadama watennath ba ne...........kohomahari nagitimu.............be with me always..then only i have my feet to get up!

 

[twisted]

wow here you go doly hehe this should be the best ive seen from you meaningwise..
i don't knw what you meant but you know what this reminded me of...the youth...we live with our parents, and feed on em..once we are done with studying and all we have to adopt adulthood...it's not easy so much things to get used..so much issues to over-come...emotional and social issues. after all the teen years and early twenties when we step into society it's not the dreamworld we saw ourselves doing once...life is no dream, things we dream of doing when we are grown ups, become distant memories..but still we can stand up on our feet...very nice poem...thanks

 

[Doly]

Hariyatama hari weti weti nageinna onne apita kawuru nethiwunath apita api innawa kiyala hithagena
as poem really good

Thanks Aravinda Aiye...
ow attatama...ekama thama wenna one

 

[Doly]

nice .....................................

Thankssssssssssss

 

[Pentagram]

Nice Poem akki!
wenada wagema lassanai!

 

[chico]

nice poem sis

 

[ushi_prem]

අැත්ත නංගා...
අපි උත්සාහ කරන්න ඔෙන් ඒකට තමා......
ලස්සනයි ඔයාෙග නිසදැස......

 

[Doly]

WOW MENU.... NAN GA .... LASSANA NIRMANAYAK....

Thanks Chameera Aiya

 

[Doly]

Well done sis.. come on!!!!!

thanksssssssssssssssssss aiye

 

[Doly]

Harima...Lassanai Nangi...

thanks aiye

 

[Doly]

Hodai aththatama hodai ..........

thsnkssssssssssssssss

 

[Wali Kukula]

Mewa liyanne oyamada?
Nathnam pothakin balala danawada?
Nathnam net ekin hoyala danawada?

 

[cjstyle]

hondai hondatama liyawila thyanawa...,habai tikak clear background ekak use karanam effect eka thawa wedi..., dan thiyana ekath ekka tikak kiyawanna amarui

 

[Doly]

Mewa liyanne oyamada?
Nathnam pothakin balala danawada?
Nathnam net ekin hoyala danawada?

mewa liyanne....pothakin balalawath, net eken aranwath neme brother.
Kavi liyana kenekta eka eka dewal hitenawa. ewa eya liyala kaviyak vidiyata galapanawa.

 

[Zeus]

Niyama kaviyak sis
Taramak gangi akkage kavi vage
Anyway lassanai