~ හොදටෝම ඇති දැන් ~

[Doly]

a little bit harder to read some parts.

anyway really really true. nice poem sis.

sorry for that brother
i couldnt match the colour thats y.

thanks a lot for ur comments

 

[Doly]

wow ,hari lassanaine,oayath hodata mole thiyenawa wage hehe

apoooooooooooo
oya hithan unne mata molayak na kiyalada??

thanks brother

 

[Doly]

nice poem minu....attatama godak arthawath saha lassanai...kenek hamadama watennath ba ne...........kohomahari nagitimu.............be with me always..then only i have my feet to get up!

No worries Kasun Aiya..........
surely i will be there always for you
everything will be alright very soon

 

[Wali Kukula]

mewa liyanne....pothakin balalawath, net eken aranwath neme brother.
Kavi liyana kenekta eka eka dewal hitenawa. ewa eya liyala kaviyak vidiyata galapanawa.

Apita ehema lassana dewal hithenne nahane

 

[Doly]

Apita ehema lassana dewal hithenne nahane

eham hitanna epa brother...........
Kaviyak liyanna try karanna................

 

[Doly]

wow here you go doly hehe this should be the best ive seen from you meaningwise..
i don't knw what you meant but you know what this reminded me of...the youth...we live with our parents, and feed on em..once we are done with studying and all we have to adopt adulthood...it's not easy so much things to get used..so much issues to over-come...emotional and social issues. after all the teen years and early twenties when we step into society it's not the dreamworld we saw ourselves doing once...life is no dream, things we dream of doing when we are grown ups, become distant memories..but still we can stand up on our feet...very nice poem...thanks

As i told you....much happy to get ur GOOD comment on my poems.
coz i feel like i`ve improved a bit.( small wise)
its my pleasure Awantha Aiya........

yeah....its damn true.....
the time pass by we have to stand up on our feet.with strong

Thanks again for ur comment

 

[Doly]

Nice Poem akki!
wenada wagema lassanai!

Thanks brother

 

[X men]

Soo talented and its words....!
Nice try.
Good One

 

[Doly]

nice poem sis

thanks brother

 

[Doly]

අැත්ත නංගා...
අපි උත්සාහ කරන්න ඔෙන් ඒකට තමා......
ලස්සනයි ඔයාෙග නිසදැස......

godaaaaak stuti

 

[m3pium]

Wow minis jivitheta lassana owadanak ekka lassana kaviyak liyala thiyenne.......... Godak lassani....

 

[twisted]

As i told you....much happy to get ur GOOD comment on my poems.
coz i feel like i`ve improved a bit.( small wise)
its my pleasure Awantha Aiya........

yeah....its damn true.....
the time pass by we have to stand up on our feet.with strong

Thanks again for ur comment

ya you've improved ..compare you later work to earlier work..you'll know how good you've matured now...

i like reading from ..now this is a good theme..you should dig the inner struggles and personal issues of life more. it's always good stuff ..since they are coming from yourveryself they always tend to present better

 

[Vathu]

Oya sure ekatama campus ekaka...neda?

 

[Doly]

Soo talented and its words....!
Nice try.
Good One

Thanks brother

 

[Doly]

Wow minis jivitheta lassana owadanak ekka lassana kaviyak liyala thiyenne.......... Godak lassani....

Thanks alot dear

 

[Doly]

Wow minis jivitheta lassana owadanak ekka lassana kaviyak liyala thiyenne.......... Godak lassani....

thankssssssssssssssss dear

 

[Doly]

ya you've improved ..compare you later work to earlier work..you'll know how good you've matured now...

i like reading from ..now this is a good theme..you should dig the inner struggles and personal issues of life more. it's always good stuff ..since they are coming from yourveryself they always tend to present better

ammoooooooooooooooooooo
panditha katha dannawane

 

[Doly]

Oya sure ekatama campus ekaka...neda?

 

[dulhari]

fantastic....................................great work

 

[Renesas]