෴ගිණි වැදුණු සෙනෙහස෴

[chintha4u]

෴ගිණි වැදුණු සෙනෙහස෴

 

[twisted]

most ppls personal jesus ...you have wonderfully summerized the essence of it ...and if one can get rid of stress and feel relax or whatever at the cost of like 10 years of the life, id consider that ..(call me retarded now) lol. ..that said, this poem struck me deep..very well written bro congrats and thanks for sharing.

 

[sherlock]

lassana nirmanayak

 

[chintha4u]

most ppls personal jesus ...you have wonderfully summerized the essence of it ...and if one can get rid of stress and feel relax or whatever at the cost of like 10 years of the life, id consider that ..(call me retarded now) lol. ..that said, this poem struck me deep..very well written bro congrats and thanks for sharing.

Well if they call you retarded, what would they call me? Looks like they afraid to comment even. lol

Thank you very much for the comment bro...

 

[Doly]

A fantastic expression
Each line bears a deep meaning…each word shouts…each phrase cries …each state is true.

Such a bitter world!

VERY WELL DONE BROTHER

 

[kassaD]

meaningful poem..as minu said each word is very well constructed.....patta keep it up bro

 

[chintha4u]

lassana nirmanayak

Thanks machan

 

[DiLakshika]

Hoda nirmanayak sahodaraya

 

[twisted]

Well if they call you retarded, what would they call me? Looks like they afraid to comment even. lol

Thank you very much for the comment bro...

yeah..surprised about the number of replies here

 

[kasuncj]

niyamai bro ela ela elaa