♥ ♫ ♥දෙන්න මට ඔබේ...♥ ♫ ♥

[sachii]

so nice
but i cant agree

thanks ayya
would you tell me the reason that you don't agree pls

 

[roshant]

thanks ayya
would you tell me the reason that you don't agree pls

no its a poem of nice artistic quality.
i said content of it.its not how u feel when u grow older

 

[sachii]

can u still say this after 15 years of love

I know its natural love will not last forever but we have to protect our love. same as our lives.

 

[damidu]

ela ela.. !! niyamai !!

 

[sachii]

ela ela.. !! niyamai !!

oh your first post in the Elakiri.
I made you to make it.
anyway thanks ayya

 

[sachii]

meke kiyana widihata meyage kisima body part ekak nadda?

As usual MAXXA creation ,,, i rate it 8/10

ehema ne ane. ehema karanwada man
haa haa thanks dear

 

[sachii]

its pretty simple and clear..says how one commits oneself to love beyond belief..nice poem sachi

thanks awantha

 

[niki771]

wow akki... hariiiiiimmaa lassanai....

 

[sachii]

wow akki... hariiiiiimmaa lassanai....

thanks nangi

 

[Kronic]

ම්ම්ම් ලස්සන පොයම් එකක්
ආදරය උතුරනවා

uthuranawa kiyanne ban anna arahe dore galanawa thaamath

 

[sachii]

uthuranawa kiyanne ban anna arahe dore galanawa thaamath

ko ko oya dakkda
hoda nadda?

 

[rockcity68]

nice one sis rep+

 

[roshant]

mama oba hamu una...
lan uwa...
apage sith ya una...
api adarayayen baduna....
obe hadawatha mage bawa haguna...


sundara dinayak nowana dinayak!!!
dinayaka apa wen we giya.
obe dasa kadulin themenu mama dutuwa..
oba gana sita mama dinayak aduwa.
dina dekak duk una.
sathiyak mulu lowama mage nowana bawa situwa.
obage sitiwili mage manase konaka saga uwa..

awrudak gewee giya.
awrudu dekak awrudu thunak awrudu pahak gewee giya
awruda dahayak gewee giya

dineka oba ma nawatha hamu una.
oba ma desa bala mada sina pawa.
enamuth eya mada sinawak pamani.
dan ma oba nodanimi..
dan oba kawdai mama nodanimi
obe sitiwili mata nothere
mama mage lokaye
oba obage lokaye

this is my poem ..

 

[damm2009]

Nice one sis

 

[sachii]

mama oba hamu una...
lan uwa...
apage sith ya una...
api adarayayen baduna....
obe hadawatha mage bawa haguna...


sundara dinayak nowana dinayak!!!
dinayaka apa wen we giya.
obe dasa kadulin themenu mama dutuwa..
oba gana sita mama dinayak aduwa.
dina dekak duk una.
sathiyak mulu lowama mage nowana bawa situwa.
obage sitiwili mage manase konaka saga uwa..

awrudak gewee giya.
awrudu dekak awrudu thunak awrudu pahak gewee giya
awruda dahayak gewee giya

dineka oba ma nawatha hamu una.
dan ma oba nodanimi
dan oba kawdai mama nodanimi
obe sitiwili mata nothere
mama mage lokaye
oba obage lokaye

this is my poem ..

this is nice ayya
may be this is the reality you said.
so you can write poems. keep writing.

 

[sachii]

nice one sis rep+

thanks brother

 

[sachii]

Nice one sis

thanks brother

 

[~v3n0m~]

really nice. keep posting more poems

 

[roshant]

this is nice ayya
may be this is the reality you said.
so you can write poems. keep writing.

thanks
slightly edited

 

[~stealth~]

අපූරු නිර්මානයක් බව දැනෙනවා...
වචනවල අකුරුවල සුළු අඩුපාඩු මගහරවාගෙන තවත් නිර්මාන කරන්න..
සුබපතනවා බලාපොරොත්තු ඉටුවෙන්න කියා.....
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