~ Did He Die ? ~

[j2l]

 

[archirasika]

ඔහු මියගියා මල්ලි.. ඒත් ඔහුගේ ආත්මය නැවත නැවතත් අපි අතර සැරිසරනවා..

සාර්තක නිර්මානයක් සහෝ........

 

[DiLakshika]

yes he is......bt he is not

good concept Joel

 

[j2l]

ඔහු මියගියා මල්ලි.. ඒත් ඔහුගේ ආත්මය නැවත නැවතත් අපි අතර සැරිසරනවා..

සාර්තක නිර්මානයක් සහෝ........

bohoma sthuthie rasika aiyya....

 

[mdee]

Yes person did die, because morale is dead in our society. Mother Nature blooms many flowers shower dead sole with colorful soft petals and kind fragrance. Unfortunately florist plucked them to decorate the palace which shelters the bench and hang-man. Florist fulfills his contractual obligation and waits for next customer to come – the dead body. So dead is alive to die. More for florist.

Nice work saho.

 

[j2l]

yes he is......bt he is not

good concept Joel

thanks dil !

 

[j2l]

Yes person did die, because morale is dead in our society. Mother Nature blooms many flowers shower dead sole with colorful soft petals and kind fragrance. Unfortunately florist plucked them to decorate the palace which shelters the bench and hang-man. Florist fulfills his contractual obligation and waits for next customer to come – the dead body. So dead is alive to die. More for florist.

Nice work saho.

thanks yalu ... appreciate !

 

[cspmaxx]

good one bro.

 

[j2l]

good one bro.

thanks mate !

 

[dilrasan]

Wow...masterpiece...
Very well managed the Words you Use and the COncept is impressive...
keep it up..

 

[ronsilva]

This creation is like a universal symphony from a vast group of well known musicians playing to the world audience...

The way you control the Shakespearean tune of words throughout the poem has stolen my heart and is very impressive.

You are a very talented bilingual asset to this modern society..

Wonderful.. amazing piece...

keep writing...God bless you malliya.....

 

[nwnbs]

එවැනි මිනිසුන් මිය යයිද... ඔව්... අපේ මිනිස්කම නැති උණ දවසට ඔවුන් මිය යයි...
හොඳ නිර්මාණයක් මල්ලියා... වචන එහෙම ලස්සනට යොදාගෙන තියෙනව... සුබ පැතුම්...

 

[j2l]

Wow...masterpiece...
Very well managed the Words you Use and the COncept is impressive...
keep it up..

thank you my friend for your valuable comment ...!

 

[j2l]

This creation is like a universal symphony from a vast group of well known musicians playing to the world audience...

The way you control the Shakespearean tune of words throughout the poem has stolen my heart and is very impressive.

You are a very talented bilingual asset to this modern society..

Wonderful.. amazing piece...

keep writing...God bless you malliya.....

thanks ron aiyya... as u do always your words, your encouraging always give me strength to do my new creations and also your vision .. the way you think help me to go deep into this world to find the hidden truths... so I'm trying my best to give out something best... thanks alot ... Budu saranai !

 

[j2l]

එවැනි මිනිසුන් මිය යයිද... ඔව්... අපේ මිනිස්කම නැති උණ දවසට ඔවුන් මිය යයි...
හොඳ නිර්මාණයක් මල්ලියා... වචන එහෙම ලස්සනට යොදාගෙන තියෙනව... සුබ පැතුම්...

bohoma sthuthie nuwan saho...

 

[Meeeharaka]

එවැනි මිනිසුන් මිය යයිද... ඔව්... අපේ මිනිස්කම නැති උණ දවසට ඔවුන් මිය යයි...
හොඳ නිර්මාණයක් මල්ලියා... වචන එහෙම ලස්සනට යොදාගෙන තියෙනව... සුබ පැතුම්...

kiwwath wage ehema ayata maranaya kiyana sankalpaya adala nethiwa ethi...
Great one bro

 

[Anjala_88]

Yeah he died physically but still his name is immortal .That "Immortal" statement might make some sense. captivating and bewitching

keep writing bro ..Good Luck..!

 

[subashani]

මිය ගියත් සදා මිනිස් හිතේ බැදුණ මිනිසෙක්.

ඔහු සිතට එන්නෙ බියත් සමගය.


අලුත් මතෘකාවක්.

අපූරැයි.

ඔබට ජය

 

[j2l]

kiwwath wage ehema ayata maranaya kiyana sankalpaya adala nethiwa ethi...
Great one bro

bohoma sthuthie bandu aiyya...

 

[j2l]

Yeah he died physically but still his name is immortal .That "Immortal" statement might make some sense. captivating and bewitching

keep writing bro ..Good Luck..!

thanks.... appreciate your criticism ..