I've made mistake - im going to Run

[Doly]

My dear friends............
i dnt knw what is your view of Doly( Minu)but i always tried to become a good friend for EK family.
please eveyone come & read this poem


Everything seems so dark
I don't know which way to turn
I hurt so deep with your friendship
Now it's time to run……

I never thought things in my life could be so wrong,
Look at the things I have done
I want to live life so right
But now I am trapped in the endless ring of sadness……..

How can I put this feeling out?
Does anyone know who I am?
I should not stay in your friendship
I was going to run……


If this is how life is suppose to be
Don't let it haunt me
Someone took me away with his friendship
pretended me that he is right from everything

I don't want to get hurt anymore
I don't want to stay in your friendship
Thank you so much for opening the blindfold,
And knowing me the hidden truth and fake in you..

That’s truth that im the one who offered your friendship
But it’s not the meaning I wish to win your heart
I've made mistake and got late to understand you
You are the one who make me winner being loser...



Minu

 

[dumira j]

Nice thought

 

[Pentagram]

nice poem!

 

[archirasika]

Dear sister….this is my first English poem, exclusively for you…

World is pure, beautiful and kind
Sun is shining, moon is glooming
No one is willing to
Grab its joy…
Everyone is using colored lenses..
With red lenses…I see you red…
With blue lenses…I see you blue…
Without lenses, I see you..
I see your pure heart….

You have offer your pure friendship
Someone has grabbed it as lust ship
You are right….you had lost….

Lost a chance to be cheated again…….

We are with you kind little one…do not leave us…

 

[urbanlogo]

Gud 1....meka real experience neve neda...

 

[gn.karunarathna]

nice work both of you

 

[malkavi]

Hmm...mekata mokadda kiyanen nangi..... mata nam meka awulak wage.......

 

[ratedrkoman]

really nice minu
hoping to see more of ur poems

 

[GoNzAlEs]

maaray,,,ideas kohoma enawada manda,,

 

[maleemsg]

mmmmm denui meka dekke.... moko sisy une?

 

[Zeus]

Thank you so much for opening the blindfold,
And knowing me the hidden truth and fake in you..

Wow those lines remind me ur great poem(for me) winner being looser( i even love the topic of that poem)
Nice poem sis

But???????????

i dnt knw what is your view of Doly( Minu)but i always tried to become a good friend for EK family.
please eveyone come & read this poem

Those line scaring me r u serious wi the idea of this poem
I wish not
Keep it up ur good wrk sisi

 

[Hiranchandima]

w@s happening??? tikak solaman wage,,,,,nice poem tho

 

[||~DxxCxxxx~||]

I hope this guy get the message...

 

[archirasika]

I hope this guy get the message...

 

[Mal Aiyya]

Bro you can head to the Dark Zone I guess... (hik hik hik hik)

 

[X men]

r there any problem..???

 

[Rockey_ssr]

ai doly mokada prob aka???

 

[gayancc]

gd wrk

 

[sdlrs6]

owa ohoma thamai.dont worry.

 

[Doly]

Nice thought

thanks