I've made mistake - im going to Run

[Doly]

nice poem!

Thanks Brother

 

[isuruimg]

mokakda wune ??
ny way nice one

 

[sasini]

nice

 

[Doly]

Dear sister….this is my first English poem, exclusively for you…

World is pure, beautiful and kind
Sun is shining, moon is glooming
No one is willing to
Grab its joy…
Everyone is using colored lenses..
With red lenses…I see you red…
With blue lenses…I see you blue…
Without lenses, I see you..
I see your pure heart….

You have offer your pure friendship
Someone has grabbed it as lust ship
You are right….you had lost….

Lost a chance to be cheated again…….

We are with you kind little one…do not leave us…

Thank u so much Aiye. Ur 1st English poem for me…………….
Thanks again.
Aiya my thoughts are very clear. he is one of my friend only.
Nothing else. I can swear on my Amma.

 

[mottaya]

mokada oya me adanne????

 

[Doly]

Gud 1....meka real experience neve neda...

yes real experience

 

[sirajstc]

Hmm...mekata mokadda kiyanen nangi..... mata nam meka awulak wage.......

matath

 

[archirasika]

Thank u so much Aiye. Ur 1st English poem for me…………….
Thanks again.
Aiya my thoughts are very clear. he is one of my friend only.
Nothing else. I can swear on my Amma.

i know that dear!

 

[Doly]

really nice minu
hoping to see more of ur poems

Thank u brother

 

[hbkrandil7]

Nice......

 

[gayan kalhara]

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhh DOn't RUn Just FACE it..

YOU CAN RUN, BUT YOU CAN'T HIDE>>>>

 

[sithmini]

wooww nice poem.....bt hope diz z nt ur own experience

 

[nite]

 

[buddhika19]

goooooooooooood

 

[skcolombage]

GuD2

 

[Doly]

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhh DOn't RUn Just FACE it..

YOU CAN RUN, BUT YOU CAN'T HIDE>>>>

im trying to face .thanks

 

[Doly]

wooww nice poem.....bt hope diz z nt ur own experience

its has happened Sis ...anyway hope not again in future

 

[yohantha]

nice poem though its sad
its so hard to find where the friendship ends and the relationship starts

 

[Doly]

nice poem though its sad
its so hard to find where the friendship ends and the relationship starts

hmmm! agree with u dear............thanks a lot brother