Just Beside You.. || My 1st Poem ||

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

Den meka liyala sathiyaka withara wenawane......
den thamai family ekata pennanne neda>?

Well DOne malli Keep It Up!

Ahh Solly hehehe... trust me... liyala dawas dekakata passe thamai Eyaatama pennuwe... hehehe.. nikan lejjai lejjai wage

 

[harshafx]

hehehe... ela ney nama ... SaLmAnAh
THanu pau ney

Ahhh poster... solly kollo .. danne nedda .. fodi fublicity ekakata!!

thanu??

 

[maleemsg]

Ahh Solly hehehe... trust me... liyala dawas dekakata passe thamai Eyaatama pennuwe... hehehe.. nikan lejjai lejjai wage

buhahahaha
Hooo paw wede...!

 

[jayanthah]

Ela.......Ela.....good try ma' boy......keep on writing, you can improve........
Welldone

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

wow kl kl seen machoo keep it up patta work .. and congrtzz to u man

Ah tnxx Bro....................................................!!!

 

[lakiya123]

nice aaaaaaaaa

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

Ela.......Ela.....good try ma' boy......keep on writing, you can improve........
Welldone

Ah Tnx a lot 4 ur comment bro....

i knw its nt d best... bt.. jst .. rote it frm all my heart... dunno whther i posted in d correct section... coz.... this section is for... d poets.... dunno whre i belong here

 

[jayanthah]

Ah Tnx a lot 4 ur comment bro....

i knw its nt d best... bt.. jst .. rote it frm all my heart... dunno whther i posted in d correct section... coz.... this section is for... d poets.... dunno whre i belong here

Did I say it's not good............you have talents, improve it!!!
Dont worry abt the section, even I have posted in this section, we should end Malee's domination in this thread

Keep up the good work bro....................

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

nice aaaaaaaaa

Tnxxx bro!!!

nd welcome to EK!!

 

[Nash_Node]

someone did a lot of calculations !

did you take into account the mid week holiday's like "poya days" as well ???

anyways.. nice poem bro. keep it up

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

Did I say it's not good............you have talents, improve it!!!
Dont worry abt the section, even I have posted in this section, we should end Malee's domination in this thread

Keep up the good work bro....................

Affatahudu.. Dominate Malee.....

Nash_Node gen guti kannai wenne

 

[Eclipse]

machoo diz 1s great .. btw never thought dat ull become a poet.. amazing!!

 

[amilazzz]

Ahhaa.. Umba mey kiyanne byte ekata ney

Tnx Kollaz!!

Hikz hikz.................Ubata hoada talent ekak thiyanawa
Podi podi monagal partz thhibbata panjab wage beat ekak dammoth nagala yai !

Ara Diyaraya gana kaviyak haduwoth Ubata iilaga watayata yanna puluwan wei !

 

[krizta]

Congratz machan

and nice poem also

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

Good One.............Bro........
keep it up...............

Ah Tnxxx Sis......

 

[sutherland.g.m]

ela malliya ela niyamai niyemeta liyala thiyenawa oyata liyannath puluwanne so digatama liyanna-huh oyage fiance hodin exam pass wenna kiyala man parthana karanwa....

 

[Sparxrc]

maxxa macho.........keep it up...

congratzzzzzzzzzzzz 4 12k

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

machoo diz 1s great .. btw never thought dat ull become a poet.. amazing!!

Tnxx bro..... I also nevr knew i cn rite peoms... but u sure dis is a peom

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

ela malliya ela niyamai niyemeta liyala thiyenawa oyata liyannath puluwanne so digatama liyanna-huh oyage fiance hodin exam pass wenna kiyala man parthana karanwa....

Ahh Tnx Ayya!!!!

Tnx 4 ur Encouraging words...

Tnx a lot 4 ur wishes....

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

maxxa macho.........keep it up...

congratzzzzzzzzzzzz 4 12k

Tnxxx Bro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tnx 4 d wishezz!!