Lets make a rhyming poem...

[lasanka]

oOOoOooO OooOkaY lOL lEMME tHINK ermmmm......

okies im bk... waitin for ur line heheh

 

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing

 

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating

 

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

 

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me

 

[Lil_chica]

And thats the end FOR TODAY! the poem will be closed for now...
on behalf of Lasanka and myself we welcome ur comments on our poem thus far..
and would appreciate the feedback... tnx guys and gals tc!

ps- tnx Lasanka was fun tc! hehe

 

[puja]

WOOOOW ITS SO NICE POEM

 

[lasanka]

WOOOOW ITS SO NICE POEM

hehe tnx for ur commetn !

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me
The flames still alit its ur love alone that surges through me

 

[lasanka]

And thats the end FOR TODAY! the poem will be closed for now...
on behalf of Lasanka and myself we welcome ur comments on our poem thus far..
and would appreciate the feedback... tnx guys and gals tc!

ps- tnx Lasanka was fun tc! hehe

yep thats all for today guys hope u like it...
ive quoted Lil_chica and shes worded the sign off to perfection..

 

[DJ.Parker]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me
The flames still alit its ur love alone that surges through me

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me
The flames still alit its ur love alone that surges through me
The blaze of the pain still inflames me
I wonder whether we can live with peaceful spree

 

[lasanka]

umm dude.. sozz but didnt u see the closing post???

 

[DJ.Parker]

umm dude.. sozz but didnt u see the closing post???

nopes. lol hehe its all good

 

[lasanka]

heheh cool cool ! will consider ur additions though

 

[DJ.Parker]

heheh cool cool ! will consider ur additions though

u shud cos there are two lines at the end if ur not considerin mine

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitating to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me
The flames still alit its ur love alone that surges through me
Lost in the blaze emotions gone wild
how fragile it seems but yet so mild
the constant reminder as i lean to my right
to meet ur sweet gaze be it dat or night..

k dats all for today.. k parker took ur idea but ur lines didnt exactly fit in sorry bro.. but umm tnx u can add soem tomorrow.. but read the whole thign when ur post dude ur last line was kinda repetitive.. tnx ,am

 

[DJ.Parker]

hehe ait ait