chamee777 said:hamoma eka wage nane....
nice 1 dear.....
Malinga said:apuuru nirmanayak. venas ma vidiyakata liyala thiyenne. e vagee ma sathaya kiyana deeth oya nirmanaya thula thiyanava. yatharathayata vadi naburuthaavayak sahitha nirmanayak. habai ithin e hitha illanna epaa aayenum kivvata hithata nodanima e hitha kaata hari dai. eekanum ehema thamai venne. oya kavuru kivvath anthimata eeka venava. apuuru nirmanyak.
Nisha.hasanthi said:Lassanai kawiya...
hithata chuttak dadiya damma giya erida wassen ekath hari giya..hitha elanna epa ayeth kawruthma...
hari lassanai eka..
namila007 said:kelloo okkoma eka wageee..........Boottttt thiyanawaaaaaaaaaa
Hiranchandima said:hmmooooo meya napuru wela thiyena taran....anywz nice poem sisi