~~ Mirror ~~

[methsri]

 

[mdee]

Yes you have the answer dear
I reflect you
Not your heart or inner
Yes she is in your heart
Open your eyes n
See me mirror...


Wow wonderful bro

 

[ronsilva]

"we were bonded"....

yes, definitely when the bond got destroyed that's the end of the story to some people..but you are still protecting the bond from the deepest inner windows of your heart..

good one malliya...keep writing...

god bless you......

 

[Amalka101]

Searching a broken bond through a mirror of your own heart?.....
Nicely written poem bro ...... keep it up

 

[cspmaxx]

nice creation

congartz bro

 

[j2l]

this is a nice poem meth ... mirror cannot show you her .. hmmm very good plot. though the light is there u cannot see her ... she has gone all the way from u and from ur body, yet u think she is inside... good one bro.. keep it up !

 

[DiLakshika]

THE WOUND IS STILL VERY DEEP...THATS THE TRUTH
I CAN FEEL THE DEPTH OF THAT WOUND BY READING EACH LINE...
BUT WHAT A PITY...NONE CAN NURSE IT...
NEITHER YOU...NOR ME!
YOU ARE MENTIONING IT TAKES AGES TO BE CURED...
BUT I CAN SAY...SOMETIMES...OR I'D RATHER SAY...OFTEN...WE ARE HOPELESS TO CURE THEM...
SO...LET'S TRY NOT TO MAKE THEM...
WHY DUST?
AMONG DUST....WE CAN'T SEE THE TRUTH...CAN WE?
SO...YOU ARE A TRAVELER!
I SEE...I SEE....
JUST KEEP TRAVELING...
WHAT ELSE I CAN SAY!
FULL OF EMOTIONS...

 

[Lightning_McQueen]

nicely written... keep writing! all da best!

 

[dilrasan]

At the end you have missed to put the question mark...
Anyway a nice one...i just saw this...keep it up..!

 

[methsri]

Yes you have the answer dear
I reflect you
Not your heart or inner
Yes she is in your heart
Open your eyes n
See me mirror...


Wow wonderful bro

Thank you soo much !!!!

 

[methsri]

"we were bonded"....

yes, definitely when the bond got destroyed that's the end of the story to some people..but you are still protecting the bond from the deepest inner windows of your heart..

good one malliya...keep writing...

god bless you......

For Some ppl it's nt a bond , it's jst a test ... thy use human feelings to test ... lke scientists use rats for their research. This is life .. In the end the one who kept da bond ... will survive ...

Thank you Ron ayya

 

[methsri]

Searching a broken bond through a mirror of your own heart?.....
Nicely written poem bro ...... keep it up

Thank you so much

 

[methsri]

nice creation

congartz bro

Thank youuuu bro

 

[methsri]

this is a nice poem meth ... mirror cannot show you her .. hmmm very good plot. though the light is there u cannot see her ... she has gone all the way from u and from ur body, yet u think she is inside... good one bro.. keep it up !

yeahh .... dat's wht we cald true love nvr dies ...

Thank you very much

 

[methsri]

THE WOUND IS STILL VERY DEEP...THATS THE TRUTH
I CAN FEEL THE DEPTH OF THAT WOUND BY READING EACH LINE...
BUT WHAT A PITY...NONE CAN NURSE IT...
NEITHER YOU...NOR ME!
YOU ARE MENTIONING IT TAKES AGES TO BE CURED...
BUT I CAN SAY...SOMETIMES...OR I'D RATHER SAY...OFTEN...WE ARE HOPELESS TO CURE THEM...
SO...LET'S TRY NOT TO MAKE THEM...
WHY DUST?
AMONG DUST....WE CAN'T SEE THE TRUTH...CAN WE?
SO...YOU ARE A TRAVELER!
I SEE...I SEE....
JUST KEEP TRAVELING...
WHAT ELSE I CAN SAY!
FULL OF EMOTIONS...

yeah none can hlp ...and there are no easy way out ... u hve to take da hard way ...

Thank you akka

 

[methsri]

nicely written... keep writing! all da best!

thank you so much

 

[subashani]

nice one bro

 

[methsri]

At the end you have missed to put the question mark...
Anyway a nice one...i just saw this...keep it up..!

i jst noticed dat thaxx bro

 

[methsri]

nice one bro

Thank you So much