My 1st poem Dream Girl

[789]

kattiya honda nattnam kiynna hode 1st poem ekane

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[Ashhab]

ELA MACHAN ELA

 

[LAPD]

aiya niyamai poem eka nam, api dennama ekama boat eke, habai eka wenasakata thiyenne, mage sihinaya haba wela, eth....................................

 

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Lassanai machan

 

[sutherland.g.m]

patta macahan bolada wunath maxxa aththatama lassnai

 

[G2H]

He..hee 1st poem eka harimaa lassanai.. athatama..

Heene haba karaganna uthsaha karannakoo..

Keep it up

 

[dumira j]

ahhh elakirizz ne......
lassanata liyala thiyanawa.....

keep writing brother...

 

[Doly]

I hv already given ma comments. no need again neda??

anyway keep wtitten bro

 

[hbkrandil7]

Niyamai....

 

[ishanka25]

nice bro so nice.....

 

[Aragorn]

elazz niz one!!!

 

[789]

ELA MACHAN ELA

thanxxxxxxxx machan

 

[maleemsg]

Lassanai..

 

[789]

aiya niyamai poem eka nam, api dennama ekama boat eke, habai eka wenasakata thiyenne, mage sihinaya haba wela, eth....................................

thanxxx
ekane malli mage thama na

 

[sherlock]

elakiri bro keep continue

 

[789]

Lassanai machan

thanxxxxxxxxx machan

 

[789]

patta macahan bolada wunath maxxa aththatama lassnai

thanxxxxxxxx machan

 

[ireshasy]

if this is the 1st it is really goood...
keep it up...

 

[789]

He..hee 1st poem eka harimaa lassanai.. athatama..

Heene haba karaganna uthsaha karannakoo..

Keep it up

thanxxxxxx sis
me heene haba wenne na sis

 

[789]

ahhh elakirizz ne......
lassanata liyala thiyanawa.....

keep writing brother...

thanxxxxxxxxx bro