My 1st poem Dream Girl

[789]

I hv already given ma comments. no need again neda??

anyway keep wtitten bro

thanxxxxxxxxx
oya nathnam mata eka danna bari wenawa

 

[789]

Niyamai....

thanxxxxxxxxxxx

 

[789]

nice bro so nice.....

thanxxxxxx bro

 

[789]

elazz niz one!!!

thanxxxxxxxxxx bro

 

[789]

Lassanai..

thanxxxxx sis

 

[CoolCartoon]

nice poem machan.... keep writing....


wish you find her soon

 

[789]

elakiri bro keep continue

thanxxxxxx aiya

 

[ihp56515]

mata penne nane........

 

[789]

if this is the 1st it is really goood...
keep it up...

thanxxxxxxx sis

 

[piyumal sanjeewa]

ela 1st kamama

 

[789]

nice poem machan.... keep writing....


wish you find her soon

thanxxxxxxx machan
but i'm not sure

 

[789]

mata penne nane........

affoi
ai e

 

[789]

ela 1st kamama

thanxxxxx machan
nice sigi

 

[sachithmax]

wow kolllaaa wadakaraya nee..niyamai machaaaa ,....

 

[CoolCartoon]

thanxxxxxxx machan
but i'm not sure

what you mean ?? it is up to you... when somethin comes to mind write it.. you got the talent...

 

[789]

wow kolllaaa wadakaraya nee..niyamai machaaaa ,....

thanxxxxxxxxxxx macho

 

[789]

what you mean ?? it is up to you... when somethin comes to mind write it.. you got the talent...

i mean i'm not sure i can find her
i'll write
thanxxxxxx bro

 

[Doly]

thanxxxxxxxxx
oya nathnam mata eka danna bari wenawa

now you be happy with your 1st poem & keep written

 

[kitty***]

wow mara lassanay.............

 

[CoolCartoon]

i mean i'm not sure i can find her
i'll write
thanxxxxxx bro

oh..lol.. yeah...