My 1st poem Dream Girl

[789]

now you be happy with your 1st poem & keep written

yap
i'm happy
ok i'll write

 

[789]

wow mara lassanay.............

thanxxxxx sis

 

[chiranthago]

Ela ELa mcnz
Lassanaye

 

[789]

Ela ELa mcnz
Lassanaye

thanxxxxxxxxxx

 

[Nisha.hasanthi]

congraz....lassani...keep writing...

 

[789]

congraz....lassani...keep writing...

thanxxxxxxx sis

 

[Zeus]

Ayiyo malli me poem eka kohomada hoda nathi venne
man me taram kala indalath tama poem ekek liyaganna baruva innava
oya danatamath ekek liyalane malli
Etanoinma oyata lakunu vatenavane
Me kaviye padha galapeema asarala unath
sundarayi malli
Puluvannam vena mathruka valatah tava tava kavi liyanna

 

[789]

Ayiyo malli me poem eka kohomada hoda nathi venne
man me taram kala indalath tama poem ekek liyaganna baruva innava
oya danatamath ekek liyalane malli
Etanoinma oyata lakunu vatenavane
Me kaviye padha galapeema asarala unath
sundarayi malli
Puluvannam vena mathruka valatah tava tava kavi liyanna

oyath ekak liyanna aiye
thanxxxxxxxx
ok mama liyanna balannam

 

[Rockey_ssr]

elaz mcn barida matath ........

 

[DiLakshika]

first one is nice
keep it up

 

[thm14]

hehe, nice start machoooo..
keep it up