MY FIRST PUBLISHED POEM IN ELAKIRI

Java00

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    pissupoosa jr.

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    Hi People!

    I typed this poem roughly in 3 minutes

    I think this is more like a song :rolleyes:

    I just typed this: ;)

    Even if this is not good...comment it is good :rolleyes:

    Meka ekthara aththa siduweemak wage.....:yes:
    me wage 3k withara wela thiyenawa



    Why why :confused:
    Why do you go away :no:
    Why why :oo:
    Why do you
    (methana poem eka kiyanakota 'you...oooo' kiyala adinna one)


    Ya ya....:yes:
    Please don't go away :no:
    Why why :confused:
    Isn't there another way? :eek:


    Is this..is this the way :dull:
    That girls...were meant to be
    (adinna beeeee)
    Should we kanna boots...:sorry:
    Forever! :(


    No, no :no:
    Please don't do this to me :sorry:
    How many times have I :rolleyes:
    Put reload to ur Tigo sim? ;)
    (Well actually only twice thamai damme)


    Ok...okay ;)
    You can go away :yes:
    But don't come back :no:
    'Coz I will never take you in. :yes:


    (Ita passe girl kenek voice over ekak: Ai enneth nehe)


    Is the poem okay? :)

    :P

    නියමයිනේ මචො..