my lyf

[SDS7272]

i had a lyf
which has gone far away,
i have a lyf which is came from far away
i thoght i myt have died
but i still think i must live

 

[pamithK]

very confusing with the tenses..i think u should brush up on the grammar..cos i hav eno idea wht you're trying to say!!

 

[gpindika]

Oh.........

 

[SDS7272]

dear pamith,
its sum one who belives lyf after death.he has already died.but he is not very sure.so he wants to live.hope you get the idea

 

[pamithK]

dear pamith,
its sum one who belives lyf after death.he has already died.but he is not very sure.so he wants to live.hope you get the idea

yeah now that you've told me..but the poem doesnt bring it out htat clearly..godakj hithanna wenawa..poem ekath ekka explanation ekath thibbanam sira

 

[SDS7272]

yeah now that you've told me..but the poem doesnt bring it out htat clearly..godakj hithanna wenawa..poem ekath ekka explanation ekath thibbanam sira

a poem has to be complicated pamith.unless its useless.thats my idea.