no love zone - sinhala..

[twisted]

hi this is my first poem that i post on ek and first ever i wrote in sinhala..pls point out my mistakes and tell me what you all think of it..and it's almost a translation of an english poem i wrote ..

thanks loads to sachini for typing this and doing picturerisque stuff for me lol without her i wouldn't have done this on my own at all..

 

[nad253]

lassanai ...

 

[sachii]

all the best awantha keep writing...

 

[twisted]

lassanai ...

thanks bro

 

[twisted]

all the best awantha keep writing...

in sinhala? i should think about it

 

[DiLakshika]

Wonderful.................u hv that talent keep on
good luck

 

[yashan]

Nice poem. Keep it up

 

[G2H]

Aww meka Niyamaiiii... harima lassanaiiiii..
Thawath Liyamuu..

 

[Doly]

Lassanai.hukak lassanai

 

[aravindalj]

wow machan i love this this is marvelous poem

 

[twisted]

Wonderful.................u hv that talent keep on
good luck

thank you loads

 

[twisted]

Nice poem. Keep it up

thanks bro ..i will

 

[twisted]

Aww meka Niyamaiiii... harima lassanaiiiii..
Thawath Liyamuu..

thawa liyanawa.. thanks a lot

 

[twisted]

Lassanai.hukak lassanai

thanks a lot to you

 

[chamee777]

wow lassanai..... well cm to life machan.... keep it up

 

[krizta]

in sinhala? i should think about it

lassnaii bun! sinhalen liyanna apita english bae \ Mata ba !!

 

[twisted]

wow machan i love this this is marvelous poem

thanks bro ..i was always wondering if i could do this with sinhala since it's pretty hard to work with the words ..just thank you all for encouragements

 

[twisted]

wow lassanai..... well cm to life machan.... keep it up

thanks loads bro hehe I realy found life in poetry when i thought it was lost quite sometime ago

 

[twisted]

lassnaii bun! sinhalen liyanna apita english bae \ Mata ba !!

haha sinhalen liyannan and thanks malaya

 

[Hiranchandima]

awesome dude keep writing