archirasika said:budurajanan vahanse mehema deshana karala tiyanava " appamado amata padan pamado machchu no padan appamanantha meeyanthi ye pamaththa yata mata kiyala ...
e hinda machan pamado manchino padan kiwwama wachane waradi..aruth virahitai....
other than that, poem is good, but beaware of girlish talks..... (nahaya vidinna oya wage wachana pavichchi karanawa gaanu)
kitty*** said:mara case neda ayye......................??


uhox said:Budhism walata weradi wachanen hari paharak nogehuwoth meyata ninda yanne nethi hedai......
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aravindalj said:mama hithanne oyata kavi kiyana ekama therenne nehe
