sama dema athi we nathi we..mithudamatath eya podu wee

[ravicplk]

 

[ranka]

true...lassanai

 

[sanka_classic]

ela ela ohoma yan.........

 

[ravicplk]

true...lassanai

thankss ranka....jeewithe gana hithala balanna...athiweeeeeee nathiweeeee

 

[ravicplk]

ela ela ohoma yan.........

thanksssss sanka..........

 

[sindukade1]

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[randula01]

mara gathi machan..............

 

[Boman]

Athiweem, nathiweem...athhareem, walandaganeem. Oya hama ekakma mada thamai jeevithe galagena yanne. samahara dewal nathi unoth jeevithetama apahu labenne naha. e wage dewal api raka ganna dana ganna one. habai ithin e raka gaththath jeevithaya thiyanakan witharai. maranedi e hama deyakma apita nathi wenawa.

Honda nirmanayak ravi malli sarala bawa thulin gamburak pennala deela thiyanawa

 

[ravicplk]

Athiweem, nathiweem...athhareem, walandaganeem. Oya hama ekakma mada thamai jeevithe galagena yanne. samahara dewal nathi unoth jeevithetama apahu labenne naha. e wage dewal api raka ganna dana ganna one. habai ithin e raka gaththath jeevithaya thiyanakan witharai. maranedi e hama deyakma apita nathi wenawa.

Honda nirmanayak ravi malli sarala bawa thulin gamburak pennala deela thiyanawa

thanks boman ayya....nathiwemma dukak nee,,,,,e hinda man hithanne athi weemath dukak neda...eth atheeweem nathuwa apita jeewath wenna bane.....

 

[ravicplk]

mara gathi machan..............

thanks randula,,,,,,,,bt its sad neeeeee

 

[Boman]

thanks boman ayya....nathiwemma dukak nee,,,,,e hinda man hithanne athi weemath dukak neda...eth atheeweem nathuwa apita jeewath wenna bane.....

Ow eka aththa. apita labena dewal api 'Magei' kiyana hangeemenne bara ganne malli. ithin nathi unahama dukai. onema deyak kawada hari nathi wenawa kiyana hangeema podduk hari athi karagaththoth oya wedanawa adu karaganna puluwan. e unata ehema hithanna lesi naha. wisheshayenma minissu ekka ape athi wana sambandhatha waladi.

 

[rochel1977]

moko lokka me??

 

[ravicplk]

Ow eka aththa. apita labena dewal api 'Magei' kiyana hangeemenne bara ganne malli. ithin nathi unahama dukai. onema deyak kawada hari nathi wenawa kiyana hangeema podduk hari athi karagaththoth oya wedanawa adu karaganna puluwan. e unata ehema hithanna lesi naha. wisheshayenma minissu ekka ape athi wana sambandhatha waladi.

aniwa ayya....badeem athiwena nisa neee hama dema wenne
badeem nathi una data siyalla natheewee..nawatha atheeweemak naa.

 

[ravicplk]

moko lokka me??

he heeee malli..kaviya hoda nadda
.

 

[Malinga]

aruthbara nirmanayak. saralava ha hadavathata danena, hangena aurin liyala thiyanava. upamavan manavin yodagena kiyanna uthsaha kala karuna manavin pahadili karala thiyanava. venasvana sulu looka daramathaavaya mithudamatath podu kaaranayak lesa me nirmanaya thula pahadili karamin e venasvana sulu sobavaye athi thathu chiththaruupa mavena lesa apurvathava nirmanaya karala.

 

[rochel1977]

he heeee malli..kaviya hoda nadda
.

ne ne. kaviya ela. mama baluwe umbata mokada me eka paratama relak mathk une kiyala??

 

[ravicplk]

aruthbara nirmanayak. saralava ha hadavathata danena, hangena aurin liyala thiyanava. upamavan manavin yodagena kiyanna uthsaha kala karuna manavin pahadili karala thiyanava. venasvana sulu looka daramathaavaya mithudamatath podu kaaranayak lesa me nirmanaya thula pahadili karamin e venasvana sulu sobavaye athi thathu chiththaruupa mavena lesa apurvathava nirmanaya karala.

thanksssss ayyaaaaaa

 

[rash87]

Nyz one bro
Truth is been brought out with a nyz rythm,but it certainly carry some sadness

 

[ravicplk]

Nyz one bro
Truth is been brought out with a nyz rythm,but it certainly carry some sadness

rythem is there..........bt i like to give a saddness through that rythem,..dont know that rythem is ruining the meaning,,bt i like that way.

 

[DETOX]

Ya dude its true. It's a really nice poem..